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  1. Date: 12/16/2010 10:24:00 AM
    Hello Felipe.Firstly I think as a poem this is very good.It reads well and your words flow.It also has strength.If the content is true of your life then it must have been very painful to write.If not, then you have great empathy.Although desperate and sad I liked this very much.Love June(Sylvia)