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Intervention

It has come to me with no surprise,
that I must intervene in own my demise,
but a difficult struggle will ensue
for I know I will be left in the blue.

It anchored my emotions for a time,
making me feel somewhat sublime,
yet the reality of the matter lingered there,
and I hid it well behind my spacey stare.

And while everyone saw me falling away,
my life crumbling a little each day,
I placed the blame on structure and sleep,
in an attempt to hide that I was in too deep.

I could not tell a single soul
the sadness behind my secretive toll,
and so I cried until I couldn't stop
to release myself from my emotional flop.

But now the crying has become too much,
as every night my pillow I clutch,
I have no choice than to let it go,
or the emptiness that plagues me will overthrow.

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  1. Date: 12/16/2010 4:50:00 AM
    Katie a commanding and moving write on taking control.. You sure brought the emotions across so vividly.. Enjoyed this, hope your day will be a good one, love Wilma

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 7:32:00 PM
    Most powerful and poignant write Katie and a deep look into the soul of a human being... in transition.. luv.. enjoyed this entertaining emotional piece ..appreciate your enthusiastic comments on my poetry tonight with luv..

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 2:13:00 PM
    Great emotive work..We all have been in that throws of depression on occasion so many can relate to this..Your kind comments at my work "Water Flowing" delighted my spirit..I think that you understood my work..Sara

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 2:04:00 PM
    This a powerful write on dealing with life and what it deals us... really feel your soul in this write and wish you nothing but happiness.. luv Michael