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The Breathless ' Vrishchika'

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The Breathless ' Vrishchika'

My leaves 
Lying under
Wait to scatter ;
The boughs look for 
Your swings.Your trumpet
Is an antiquated signal
To dig out the ripened treasures.

A great chef :
Jasmine fragrance,the  moonlight,
Cuckoo song,and the love at night -
You had mixed and poked ;
The heaven it had tasted.
Missing you, ‘Vrishchika’ month
Passes by, poker faced.

‘Vrishchika’ loses its verve.
Do things unnatural ;
Die things natural.
One more is withdrawn.
Listen your clarion.
My incessant winds,
Will you ever return ?


(Vrishchika,a Malayalam month(in between November and December) is noted for the incessant winds throughout the day and 
night in certain districts in Kerala,India.These winds were missing in 2010.)

Fabiyas M V

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  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:16:00 AM
    leaves mine..what?..boughs swing yours [or a bough swings] I guess this is a verse of longing for a season but I am unsure...perhaps it is simply a vehicle to relate the emotion of [longing]?

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    Date: 11/11/2011 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Debbie,'leaves' are used both literally and figuratively.Leaves are my thoughts,wishes etc.
  1. Date: 7/23/2011 1:22:00 PM
    Hi, Fabiyas, it's nice to see your win with this interesting write on a time in India that I did not know about Congrats!

  1. Date: 7/19/2011 5:06:00 AM
    Congratulations Fabiyas on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 7:44:00 PM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your fantastic win with this magnificent poetry so creative on Nature luv.. enjoy my friend...

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 8:53:00 AM
    Loved your poem Thanks for your generous support during the year 2010 Looking forward to 2011 My Best Wishes to you Suresh Iyer, India

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 5:01:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Fabiyas. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 8:07:00 PM
    Lovely fabias, now i know why u felt i was from your land i married into a malayalee family but could never visit much in kerala you have brought out the picture here so well...yes vrishchika is well described here..sunkan

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 2:05:00 PM
    Global warming has turned down so many regular features in our cosmic world, Fabiyas.

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 11:58:00 AM
    Fabiyas, it seems like the Vrishchika's winds are deepy missed by you. And yet the melody of their trumpet rings out in your poem! I hope the winds that move you so return, my friend. A beautiful descriptive poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 11:51:00 AM
    Many thankxxx FABIYAS for alerting Kashinath to the error ...appreciate and now is resolved..he unknowingly hit the block icon so close to soup mail icon and others .. appreciate my friend.. the favor and so quickly too..with luv..

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 10:44:00 AM
    Beautiful write.Thanks Fabiyas for conveying me Linda's message.I accidentally blocked her.Now unblocked-kashinath

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 10:25:00 AM
    dripping with radiant expressions of your indian holiday, fabiyas! superb... namaste, nette

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 10:20:00 AM
    Thank you for your kind comments...and for this beautiful desription of this time for you in your culture... so much enjoyed always Michael

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 9:08:00 AM
    FABIYAS.. will u do me a favor.. Kashinath has been commenting on my poetry but I cannot post a comment on his work.. would u please ask him for me to check and see if he blocked me in some way inadvertently? thankxx ...luv..

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 9:05:00 AM
    Well FABIYAS the winds have found their way to America am afraid as today it is blowing 55 mph and very frigid ..beyond cold... a wonderful write explaining the scene in India during this time of year... magnificent words my friend.. enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 9:03:00 AM
    Thanks for giving us an educational work so that we can learn something new..I am glad that I stopped by to read this one..Your presense at my work made my more lighter..Sara