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Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 3/31/2011 8:56:00 AM
    really a great poem.

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 8:05:00 PM
    how powerful! wonderful work :)

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 5:15:00 PM
    I have enjoyed reading your work today.

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 4:20:00 PM
    Patrick, My take on this is that there are too many multi-syllabic words struggling to send a sad but true message of love and belittlment of self. Keep trying and keep writing. Don't take my criticism to heart. Tear it and me apart and take it as it was intended; a peaceful offering. All the Best, Will