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The happiest day of my life

When I floated on air with exuberance
And danced to the music of fun
When I smelled the blue of the mountain
And painted a masterpiece 'in one'
When draped in silk and pink velvet
I climbed up a steeple of joy
When I swam in cold of the ocean
And sang him his first lullaby.

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  1. Date: 1/16/2011 1:44:00 PM

    Oh such a terrific read.Thanks for your very kind comment.~LUV~Teresa

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 8:15:00 AM

    I love it , sure sounds like a happy and fulfilled day

  1. Date: 1/7/2011 7:06:00 AM

    This is beautiful, joy at the birth of your baby boy I think or shades of it:)))

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 10:08:00 PM

    What can I say? This is beautiful. There is no room at all for improvement. love Polly Plafcan (pollyp)

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 1:14:00 PM

    Well done Liz. I like this entry. So much happiness and joy. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 10:26:00 AM

    Hi Liz. Thanks for the visit. Best of luck with this colour filled day. The kids really do make things a little special. Eamon

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 5:00:00 AM

    Beautiful write!Nice flow.-kashinath

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 2:04:00 PM

    This does sound like quite a joyful day, Liz! Best wishes for success in the contest with this delightful poem. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 1:28:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winning work to me..That must have been a great day of your life..Good luck in the contest..Your presence at my work delighted me exceedingly..Sara

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 11:31:00 AM

    either there getting married or having babies. they seem to be the keys to happiness. john

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 11:16:00 AM

    Hello Liz, This is lovely, you have written this from such a special place. Love it Thank you for visiting me, your kind words are always appreciated. As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 3:36:00 PM

    Lovely lines Liz .. a beautiful entry into the contest posted .... good luck ... appreciate the joy of that first lullaby as I have five sons ... thankxx for your sweet and warm welcome comments on my poetry tonight with luv..

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 11:41:00 AM

    breathtaking delicay, liz... in a few lines, you nailed your thoughts like an ensemble... wishing you a winning streak in the contest! thanks for dropping by with your encouraging insight.. warmest, nette

  1. Date: 12/12/2010 12:28:00 PM

    Liz...this is lovely...a touch of Dylan Thomas somewhere in it I feel.......good luck in the contest......i hope to enter one also but I can't settle on a form, tone etc....glad you also know Ironbridge...long ago I used to sing at a small folk music place near the bridge for a few years.....best wishes....Syd

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 7:38:00 PM

    Cool way to approach this contest, LIz. I really enjoyed reading this one (it wAS for Frank's contest, wasn't it?) LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 1:00:00 PM

    i drank it all, liz.. a riveting,. flowing masterpiece so exhuberant, i'm sure my winning widhes will bear fruit! lovely!! warmest, nette

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 12:19:00 PM

    Nice one. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Thanks for the comment.