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  1. Date: 9/21/2011 10:38:00 AM
    Very moving. You really painted pictures sad pictures of funeral here

  1. Date: 12/18/2010 12:26:00 PM
    a very sober view of deaths impact or lack of! this strengthens my belief in new beginnings Fabiyas.

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 8:12:00 PM
    your imagination is great here, Two cotton pieces In the nostrils inserted couldnt help sit back to think that phase...sunkan

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 12:50:00 PM
    this piece has caught my eye as well as inspired an idea. I thank you for such an enjoyable read. I also thank you for your comment on the kiss. although I will admit that i have more writes than i can count yet I do not know the forms that they fall under so thank you for the input on the form.

  1. Date: 12/10/2010 11:10:00 AM
    Interesting and profound Fabiyas.. Enjoyed your write tonight.. Have a fabulous weekend ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 12/10/2010 11:10:00 AM
    beautiful reflection

  1. Date: 12/10/2010 5:51:00 AM
    Death is a sad event for all...Each in their own way grieve..I don't know if this is the death of your employer or just a write about the topic of death of one who was an employer and wealthy but was very descriptive and expressive work..Your comments on my work lifted my spirits this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 8:36:00 PM
    Very profound, Fabiyas. It doesn't matter how much money we have, we can't take it with us when we die. It seems few people will truly miss "the boss" you described here. I was captivated by the last line about the pastures. Did you ever read "Grass" by Carl Sandburg? I'll never forget it and his statement in the poem is similar to the one you made here. An awesome poem for my favorites. Thanks so much for sharing this one! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 8:32:00 AM
    Very vivid FABIYAS my friend.. an intense drama into this funeral and process luv... deeply descriptive .. enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 5:54:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry today Fabiyas. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 4:29:00 AM
    I enjoyed this witty and sarcastic yet touchy piece on the Boss with two cottons in nostrils and a shroud of a hundred rupees to the millionare,

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 3:22:00 AM
    Intriguing write, nice read.