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MoUNTAIN DRoP

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MoUNTAIN DRoP

`~ MoUNTAIN DRoP~

I want to be like the mountain top.  
The higher I go, the less room I have to stop. 
A moment to think~ a moment to slow. 
With one look down!  
I release my breath and let it flow. 
My fallen star has hit the ground. 
Life's deepest thoughts will never be found. 
When no ones around! 
I will allow myself to drown,
only when the world brings me down. 
 
I want to take that key! 
Turn it around, and get lost in that moment only I see. 
I want to lose my soul!
I am ready to go!
I am ready to look! 
Ready to fall!
Ready to leave!
Leave it all! 
 
Jumping off the edge when I hit rock bottom. 
Or, should I continue my lies 
and pretend  to be the best in every ones eyes! 
The best to climb the mountain top. 
Reaching for them stars in the skies 
The best~never to look down. 
The best will never be good enough for me. 
While I am around...

~~ SKAT ~~

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  1. Date: 5/5/2014 10:40:00 PM

    Simply amazed at the depth of the imagery and insight! Had me on top of a mountain looking across blue skies into another world. One where beauty and wisdom share a fantasy ride!! Sincerely a magnificent read... Even the weak can see the glory of the strong..

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 4:17:00 PM

    Hey, there, Skat. Just going off finally. Time to clean the house and all that good stuff I 've been putting off. UGGGG. have a good one!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 8:57:00 AM

    I could feel myself falling while I read.... Beautiful and adventurous write! (hang on Skat, I'll catch you!)

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 5:24:00 PM

    SKAT This is an honest and sincere write. People shouldn't put expectations on others, but accept them for who they are. Very emotional and deep. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Friendship Will Always Live poem.

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 5:38:00 PM

    Hi Skat , It's nice to meet you, and thank you for the comment, I see you have a lot of great poems, as you know I am new to the sight, I'm still not sure what poem writing category I'm suppose to be putting them in, but hopefully with everyone's help I can learn, Hope to talk soon, Laura

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 1:08:00 PM

    oooh its good. the first two lines are my favorite. I also noticed in the first stanza you managed to rhyme 5 lines in a row... nice :)

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 9:37:00 AM

    very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 1:43:00 PM

    i got lost in this 1 to. quality

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Hi SKAT your poem inspired me to write one, I have dedicated it to you.

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 3:20:00 PM

    This is a very important piece of work. Many people live within the walls of other peoples expectations and never get to learn their true value and uniqueness. Sometimes we have to dissapoint people on our quest to find our mountain top. Sometimes what makes us the happiest may be found at the times we are in the valleys of life. Excellent poem SKAT. I like poetry that evokes emotion.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:34:00 AM

    Hello my dearest Sidney/Skat! I'm so delighted to read this gem of yours this evening! Thank you so much for sharing and for your precious time stopping by on my ABC poem. I'm so grateful and so glad with the inspiring comment you've left! More blessings and graces come back to you! Sweet hugs! love forever, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:29:00 AM

    Great write, I truly enjoyed it!! :)

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 9:15:00 AM

    Powerful thoughts in rhyme! I really like this work. :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 1:27:00 PM

    Im feeling you read My Mountain

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 10:28:00 PM

    Greatly verseful SKAT... thoughts are often sometimes deeds, a hill for jumping off, suspended between the thought n dream, if land u get a shock...:) xo Don

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:24:00 PM

    A really great write. It is easy to get lost in it and forget you are not really there. Thank you for your comment on my write... Jerri

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 3:55:00 PM

    Great writing , like an artist ,yet you paint with words

  1. Date: 12/26/2010 10:18:00 AM

    ready to fall and let everything go by this mountain drop. sounds like it would be a stress reliever.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/24/2010 9:33:00 PM

    Gud one. Merry Christmas to U & Ur fly. Luv/best wishes......Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 5:41:00 PM

    Soup mail 2 minutes

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