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Sealed in Unhappiness

Once long ago 
You made the sun shine
Now you cast
A septic sulphuric shadow
You came and stole
My heart and my happiness
And interred them
In cold grey granite stone 
Days once so brief
Now linger, last too long
As we must sit
Separate in the same room
And listen to
The silence of hurtful hate

For contest * Jaded Love*  by John Heck

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  1. Date: 12/20/2010 7:55:00 PM

    This is great writing, eamon. A very apt description of jaded love indeed! Did it not win in the contest?? GEEEZ!!

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 6:21:00 PM

    Powerful!

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 12:39:00 AM

    well written

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 3:14:00 PM

    An excellent and expressive entry Eamon.. best of luck to u my friend.. an awesome write for John to enjoy ... good luck with luv..

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 1:36:00 PM

    Short but quite meaningful write on the jaded partitions, Eamon

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 1:34:00 PM

    deep write,, a good entry for the contest,, good luck,..p.d.