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Untitled 

Afraid of heart-break,
who,
the lone wolf?

it couldn't be,
not me!!

I'm 
cocky,
confident, 
care-free.
An overwhelmingly,
magnificent
poetic marquis..

You see what I mean....:-]



Jared Pickett
12/05/2010
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  1. Pettit Avatar
    Robert Pettit
    Date: 2/12/2011 8:04:00 AM
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    I agree with everything Constance has said about this entry. Nice work.
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    Constance La France
    Date: 1/6/2011 4:58:00 AM
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    Even the most cocky and confident, care-free and "magnificent" can have their heart 'broken' yes I see exactly what you mean in this soul searching poem~~
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/7/2010 11:23:00 AM
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    OK Mr. J.. I am going for it luv... posting me entry today ... this was tremendous rush for me luv.. where do u find these challenges to fuel my fire? thankxx... my Lone Wolf... "Sweetheart" luv..
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/7/2010 8:06:00 AM
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    nope (poke!) Light & Love (Catch up on my Egypt trip on my blog?)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/6/2010 10:52:00 PM
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    this is really cute, Jared. Hey, just now got to seeing your message from over a day ago. thanks for the sweet cmments on that poem of mine you chose and I thank you very much!
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    Celene Crescent
    Date: 12/5/2010 9:25:00 PM
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    This poet marquis definitely makes me smile.No heartbreak for you Jared,not allowed :)lovely poem.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/5/2010 5:41:00 PM
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    Yes, I see.. Sara
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 12/5/2010 8:27:00 AM
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    this one knocked me off my socks, jarred.. so dixtinct.. enjoyed joining your contest! more success to you.. nette
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/5/2010 4:32:00 AM
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    Thankxxx for my 1st place with my entry.. u will never know just how much that 1st place means to the "Sweetheart"... a true challenge which sparks my fires every time... and winning 1st made me achieve my goal... for a poem to make an impact.. especially on u knowing how u are so intense about our creativity.. so u have made my football Sunday very happy ...still a BRONCOS fan luv? my GIANTS are making me crazy losing first place like that and to those boo birds...of all teams... oh no...
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/5/2010 4:29:00 AM
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    Definitely Lone Wolf... at a crossroads in emotions? it happens every now and then..luv.. this is awesomely written to say the least ... luve the honesty and sincerity of it plus how u question yourself to try to find the answer.. my friend.. just enjoy the current ride and tread lightly for now.. u know my motto.. if things are meant to be.. it will be ..nothing will stop romance... look at me... btw.. "Haunting Heroine" is all about LUV... she wrote of her luv for her man ...its all good luv


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