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Sandcastle

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Below is the poem entitled Sandcastle which was written by poet Benjamin Mitchell. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sandcastle

My sandcastle cries
As the tide washes over
It with a strong force.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2010 3:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 5:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Benjamin in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 9:54:00 PM
    Interesting personificatioin, Benjamin .Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 5:41:00 PM
    Congrats Benjamin on your win.Kashinath

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 3:31:00 PM
    Congrats Benjamin on your super win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 8:21:00 AM
    Congratulations Benjamin, on your success, agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 2:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Benjamin

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 9:31:00 PM
    Benjamin~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 5:36:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest with this very creative work..Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 10:15:00 AM
    Really like your use of personification in giving life to the sandcastles. They appear to be a metaphor for dreams/aspirations as well. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 4:16:00 AM
    Nice haiku with good images on sandcastle. Benjamin