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Love Scattered

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Love Scattered

The painting on the wall has faded just like your love for me, I see it, your eyes tell it so vividly… The glint is gone, They don’t light up, When I enter the room anymore These days I don’t even get a second glance… It is like I am part of the furniture, The novelty has worn off… Whatever happened to me being your world? I never thought this would be our end game, I still love you but your love for me has faded. Slowly but surely, we are no more, Our love no longer a priority... I am tired of being in a relationship with myself, The one who does the talking, The one who reach out first, You no longer yearn to touch me… Feeling like a byproduct Of a once beautiful union Now jaded, no longer needed…

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  1. Date: 12/8/2010 11:41:00 PM

    I gues we all are guilty of taking wordly aspects for granted, Wilma. this is a very special poem, so wonderful in it's profoundness. guess it will have to go to my fav, along with you as fav poet. Harry

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 3:23:00 AM

    This is beautifully written, sounds a lot like what I went through very recently. It's a painful thing... You convey it really well. Good work :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 9:54:00 PM

    truly well-deserved win, wima.. cheers to you! huggs, nette

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 9:27:00 PM

    well, I am glad to see you on the list, Wilma. This was a great poem from you. Congratulations, dear. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 1:05:00 PM

    Congrats Wilma on your HM in John's contest with this super brilliant write and entry my dear friend.. enjoy a special honor today all your own with luv..

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 11:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in John's "Jaded Partitions" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 6:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 1:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of jared, Wilma

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 9:12:00 PM

    Many congratulations for this win. loved the end.

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 12:37:00 PM

    We have all felt these feelings unfortunately, I wish many blessings for you, Wilma. Thanks for your congrats on the "Switch" poem. :-)

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 6:41:00 AM

    certainly, these feelings of the poet must purge themselves on this page....wonderful therapy, wonderful poem! Wilma!...and thanks, always, for your frequent comments...jimbo

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 5:53:00 AM

    i remember that look comming from april when i came into the room. but thats not why i loved this poem. it's because you were brave enough to tell me how you feel. i pretend for just a little while that your mine. and the next time i see you what a surprise will be on my face. as i come and meet you when you walk in the door. John Henry Loving III

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 4:24:00 AM

    Great topic on which to write..The creative person is the one who brings the spark back..Of course, sometimes it is hopeless for one reason or another..Sara

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 11:44:00 PM

    oopsy-- I think I was in lala land by then ;)-- and hmm, I believe the correct term would be "perfect" if you were referring to my sleepyheadedness-- lol! and that is so cool you got all that support for Educare :) way to go for you-- happy that your efforts were duly rewarded :) -- enjoy your Sunday now-- hopefully no work!-- hugs -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 11:48:00 AM

    Sad indeed my Poet partner in crime... without these pit falls in life we don't envolve into who we are....which is a wiser stronger person....with love across the skysto you..love Michael

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 10:16:00 AM

    Very sad but it does happen I know. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 10:12:00 AM

    btw-- check out my sand haiku please-- haha I finally used "sand wishes"!!! lol! now only Rapunzel's left ;)

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 10:11:00 AM

    ouchy!! You sure brought jaded to the plate here-- I am sure this is a winner! that last line of yours was prefect in ending this-- hugs-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 8:27:00 AM

    Exceptional poetry Wilma, as good a write I have read for quite a while. Raw emotions written brilliantly >> James :)

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 7:27:00 AM

    I'm so glad you wrote this Free verse dear poet....Cover the painting as much as possible ! Hunger is for those who live not in the cup-board ! The painting will not fade if you cover it ! If you get my drift Wilma ! I wanted to write a poem on this subject, and my head(LOL) started hurting! TY for taking this burden from me ! *smiles* much love, james

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 4:59:00 AM

    Wilma! you never cease to amaze me. What an absolutely beautifully written poem. You capured so much here in this free verse . Never mind the contest....number 1 poem in my book and headed for my favs....congrats on a great write

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 7:57:00 PM

    Aha, I can see it is for that contest on a jaded love! YOu did very well with it and I wish you the best in the contest. So are you telling me that there is snow just on the mountains for you guys, but it never falls on the towns?

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 11:10:00 AM

    Excellent. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Wilma and I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 10:00:00 AM

    Looking at the comments below, I guess that people realize this poem is for a contest even though it isn't stated openly....goes to show how much I am out of the loop here at the soup. This poem is sad and raw, but you wrote it very well. The emotion and frustration is just oozing out of the lines~Chris

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 9:43:00 AM

    Wilma, you've written this poem very well...perfect imagery conveying all the emotions therein. Great work and a definite one for the Winners' list, girl! Re: card- no, it is I who should thank you, my dear friend! God bless your heart! Much love, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 8:53:00 AM

    Tell me there is hope Wilma. I'm young and see so many relationships losing their spark. Good luck in the jaded partitions contest! Diane

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 8:01:00 AM

    So many people, especially young ones, enter relationships thinking the infatuation will last forever. If it is not truly love, the "novelty" wears off quickly. Very insightful poem, Wilma. Best wishes in John Heck's contest with this moving and beautifully written poem. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 7:48:00 AM

    The haunting and sad mood of this poem will touch others who feel a kinship to these same feelings....when love seems to fade, and hearts break in the wake of that loss. So heartfelt. Well written, Wilma. ~ love, Carrie