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  1. Date: 5/20/2011 2:49:00 AM
    Nicely summing up life's cruel contrasts.

  1. Date: 1/7/2011 9:23:00 AM
    Smile ~ As "Its Beauty" has Always seemed to do unto Many others ~ Smile, don't stop Painting &, "Glowing Sooo Very 'Bright!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening My Dear, Amid The Tenderly Soft Hands Ever Reaching of, 'Beautiful Love;' Sweet Dreams, 'Precious Tinkerbell;'" Bye!:)

  1. Date: 1/7/2011 9:15:00 AM
    Smile ~ Amid this precious portrait painted within the colours from "Beautiful Eyes" of sight and compassion I can See that the Song remains but the same; "Lovely & 'Priceless!!!"' ~ I shall fave "This Pearlestic Gem" &, "Thank You" for stopping by and "Yes, 'You Are, Cinderella;' More!!!" ~ I hope that life is and has been treating "Your Beauty" immaculately my dear and that, "Your 'Diamond Gift' of A Light," has been shining brightly within "Your Own Loving Heart" ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 1/7/2011 9:03:00 AM
    Smile ~ "Good Evening 'My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Lovely Cinderella!!!'" ~ What a very revealing painting once more of "Your Beauties 'Loving Heart & Soul;' Always So Caring 'Your Treasures' Have Been; 'Sweetened Lyrics' Playing Wonderous Chords of 'Enchantings Tunes' So, 'Very Beautiful!!!'" ~ For the most part this has Always seemed unto myself the Canvas of whom "'Your' Splendours Are" &, I have mentioned this "Truth" unto "Your Magnificence" a few times afore my dear & ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 12/7/2010 7:49:00 AM
    This is riviting and impressive, that last line blew me away, well done~~

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 12:21:00 AM
    I'm so sorry, Celene. The first time I read this, my eyes must have seen the word "begs' but my mind was reading it "bags" Power of mind over everything else. It is so strange how that works! NOW your senryu carries a very profound meaning to me. Glad you pointed it out for me. luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 8:03:00 AM
    went compleatly over my head. john

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 7:35:00 AM
    Society captured in so few words, and it ain't gonna get any better >> James :)

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 6:32:00 AM
    Well inspiring dear poet ! Great Senryu ! much love, james

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 8:46:00 PM
    I really like this, Celene. On line three, did you mean "and" ? Because just that one little word can change the meaning for me. Good topic to choose too! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 11:02:00 AM
    Excellent. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Celene. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 10:30:00 AM
    Hi Celene. How well you have portrayed the have and have not society. This should be read and digested by everyone who has lost the true spirit of Christmas and turned it into a commercial holiday. Thanking you for your kind comment. Eamon

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 9:38:00 AM
    This is a wonderful Senryu so relevant to our everyday lives but more so at this time my "All She Will Be Needing" with a similar theme...inspired years ago while living and working in NYC. Her name was Helga and I'll never forget her...Thank you for the birthday wish, Celene. That was really sweet! Blessings always, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 9:29:00 AM
    Wow Celene your write really hits home.. This is something that should be on a billboard because you audit all in just three lines.. Superb, love Wilma

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 8:21:00 AM
    What a superb images you have penned on the poor people, Celene

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 7:29:00 AM
    A poignant picture Celene my dear sweet friend.. u have penned this one so perfectly .. very effective lines ... and message.. making it a new fav today ..hope u enjoy a happy weekend with luv..

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 6:44:00 AM
    Thanks for reading what you called'my garbage' Mimi. .If it touches one soul to think of those less fortunate,its enough for me. .hugs. Celene.

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 6:08:00 AM
    Good one..That is true everywhere..Sara

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 3:14:00 AM
    what a high maintenance life! enjoyed this thought-provoking piece,celene.. warmest, nette

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 2:51:00 AM
    Your comments below helped me enjoy this senryu fully well.Nice,Celene