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EmotionLess

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EmotionLess

      EMOTIONLESS

When I wake up in the morning,
With the light in my face.
I'm reminded of your disgrace!

How can I do this to myself?
Can Calgon really take me away?
Will I ever wake up to the melody of the Blue Jay?

What am I suppose to do?
Can somebody shot me from my misery?
Losing myself to his meshing history.

It's my fault for inviting~he that dropped my heart to the floor.
Well, I have nothing else to say.
Except, "Life goes on everyday!"

SKAT

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  1. Date: 8/26/2014 10:34:00 AM
    Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination

  1. Date: 6/11/2014 3:47:00 AM
    Hey girl, waas up? Great write from sometime ago, but I hadn't read it, so...I imagine you're tucked safely and warmly in a healthy relationship by now--I hope so. If not, misery loves company, so come on by :) SKAT, you rock my world...xxx...Mel :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 7:04:00 PM
    We are built upon the experiences of our life. And so it may be hard at times, in the end it makes us who we are. So never ever give up or you'll miss a great ending. Always enjoy reading your poems. Take care always.

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 12:03:00 PM
    I love this poem and thank you for the comment on mine x

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:46:00 AM
    ENJOYING YOUR POETRY>>> life goes on for sure! good job on this poem

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Hi Skat, liked your piece i read today. Can relate to it in some ways, much earlier in my life. By now you shall probably hear the Blue Jay singing, but just in case, you will once more hear the Blue Jay singing . Sad but true emotions my little friend. You will go on, there may be more mistakes on the horizon, but one day, yes, that one day, it shall happen, the river shall run to you and stay with you. It may have already done so already. Take care now. Your Friend....MIKE.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:05:00 AM
    SKAT There is an important message in here that love will find you and life doesn't stop. Full of emotion and feeling. nice job

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 9:38:00 AM
    ...and the life goes on...everyday, everywhere. Got you, loud and clear.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Very true! I loved this poem, SKAT! Well done! I can also relate to your feelings in this poem. I have many poems similar to this, I just haven't gotten to post them yet. Thank you once again for the kind comments on my poem "If I Died Now". It really means a lot!

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:23:00 AM
    true shit

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:37:00 PM
    nicely stated.thanks for the visit.happy days to you and family.take care

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:07:00 AM
    I love this poem skat :) it was well written and the vibe was sad but it was real. That's what I think is important that I can tell it was a real emotional writing. Thanks for sharing it was great vision food! -Yours Truly

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:09:00 AM
    There is romance and love out there. It will find you. Lovely poem. Betty

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 11:52:00 PM
    you wull wake up to the melody of the blue jay dear.Sad and beautiful

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 1:46:00 PM
    sometimes its hard to cry

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 2:24:00 PM
    this was so beautifully written. cory

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 4:19:00 AM
    I really liked it. I do agree that life goes on everyday

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 7:01:00 PM
    Funny you should mention it... I was just thinking about shooting myself today, it was after attending a writers workship! I hope your emotionlessness doesn't last forever. Julie

  1. Date: 12/31/2010 8:07:00 PM
    yes, life goes on, well written piece, although life goes on "every day", perhaps until we breathe no more... I tend to take things literal, forgive me. Cindy

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 5:26:00 PM
    emotionless is a problem at one point. but also an advantage. a poem that is all too real. ~Always&Forever Lynette

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