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EmotionLess

.       EMOTIONLESS

When I wake up in the morning,
with the light in my face.
I'm reminded of your disgrace!

How can I do this to myself?
Can calgon really take me away?
Will I ever wake up to the melody of the Blue Jay?

What am I suppose to do?
Can somebody shot me from my misery?
Losing myself to his meshing history.

It's my fault for inviting~he that dropped my heart to the floor.
Well I have nothing else to say.
Except, "Life goes on everyday!"



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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:37:00 PM

    nicely stated.thanks for the visit.happy days to you and family.take care

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:07:00 AM

    I love this poem skat :) it was well written and the vibe was sad but it was real. That's what I think is important that I can tell it was a real emotional writing. Thanks for sharing it was great vision food! -Yours Truly

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:09:00 AM

    There is romance and love out there. It will find you. Lovely poem. Betty

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 11:52:00 PM

    you wull wake up to the melody of the blue jay dear.Sad and beautiful

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 1:46:00 PM

    sometimes its hard to cry

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 2:24:00 PM

    this was so beautifully written. cory

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 4:19:00 AM

    I really liked it. I do agree that life goes on everyday

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 7:01:00 PM

    Funny you should mention it... I was just thinking about shooting myself today, it was after attending a writers workship! I hope your emotionlessness doesn't last forever. Julie

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 5:26:00 PM

    emotionless is a problem at one point. but also an advantage. a poem that is all too real. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 10:46:00 AM

    a great write on pain and the acceptance that life does indeed go on whether we chose to stay broken or not! nice work!

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 2:54:00 PM

    Strong work Skat andhowthe hell are ya my friend good to read your work today sorry i havent sooner cheers gonzo

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 11:36:00 PM

    saying hi, just saying hi to you, Irma ^_^ enjoy your Sunday, ok?

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 5:30:00 PM

    Hi, there, Skat. are you enjoying the evening. I guess the site will be closed very soon, 10 pm NY time. Watch me scramble now!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 4:59:00 PM

    Very interesting, I enjoyed this write and I'm looking forward to reading more.. Love Dana

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 4:29:00 AM

    Can I submit more than one haiku in Sandcastle contest?, Irma.

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 2:51:00 AM

    You're right with that last line, SKAT! Enjoyed reading your poem today, my friend! Hugs, Emilia:)

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 9:33:00 PM

    Hey, I missed this one!! Yes, you can be left cold sometimes and emotionless and this poem sure gets that across. Soupmail, Irma

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 6:22:00 PM

    truly awesome,, and sure enjoyed it,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 5:26:00 PM

    I can relate to feeling like a book sometimes, but mostly a song that can be turned down at will or changed as my moods do. So enjoyed Skat. Thanks for 4th place on my "Snowflakes" poem with love Michael

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 4:28:00 PM

    Got that last line correct..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for stopping by my work and reading and commenting..Thanks for chosing my work to place in your contest..Sara

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 2:06:00 PM

    Skat, Very emotional and deep write. I for one have been there for sure. I like this one As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 1:11:00 PM

    a quizzical, revolutionary piece, SKAT! SOUPMAIL :o> nette

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 11:56:00 AM

    I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day SKAT*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 11:26:00 AM

    rough emotions'audree

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 9:22:00 AM

    NOT FICTIONAL, I'M NOT A BOOK. TRUE HUMAN FEELINGS. ALL THOUGH I DO WISH I WAS A BOOK. THAT WAY I CAN CLOSE MYSELF WHEN EVER. HE HE! *luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 7:07:00 AM

    HEARTFELT!I'm sure you are worth more than that. .Hope its fictional,If not,you are young enough to start over. .im so glad to read you again.

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 4:58:00 AM

    Very bitter and raging feelings you have penned in this write, SKAT

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 3:19:00 AM

    oooh, i can feel the confusing array of feelings here.. calgon has a nice whiff! a rare, sell-scribed piece, SKAT! much enjoyed..:) warmest, nette

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 3:17:00 AM

    thank you , SKAT for a wonderful contest.. may you have more!! warmest, nette

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 7:58:00 PM

    Emotions and feelings so deep ..causing this creative and excellent write my dear friend ... an intense poem of inner heartache and deep luv... I feel your pain in this one my friend..y BFF ... hope all is well with u and how is Royal doing? hope your holiday weekend was lovely ...your BFF always and forever and beyond...with luv..