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SNOWNSENSE

 WONDERLAND OF SNOW

White powdery wisps

Instead of the morning dew...

Winter's Wonderland


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  SNOW ANGEL

Walking past the park

Wings made with childlike passion

Angelic Image


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   SNOW  SNOW  SNOW

Whitened droplets

Falling from gray clouds above

Catch one on your tongue


        * * * 

       SNOW

White covers the ground

Trouble starting the blower

Shovel time...again


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   JACK FROST

Chilled air on glass

Panes painted with icy hues

Scenes from Jack's palette.









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  1. Date: 12/25/2011 10:56:00 PM

    Danile, i remeber these haikus, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 10:49:00 AM

    wonderful set of haikus , congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 1:05:00 PM

    i like the cascading effect and wording of this, it accentuates the theme.Daniel

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 4:08:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 3:17:00 PM

    Congrat my friend...well deserved....

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 8:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on this well deserved win in Skat's contest, Daniel

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 8:25:00 AM

    Congratulations Daniel on your first place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 7:52:00 AM

    This set is really lovely, I feel the cold, congrats on your win with these:)

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 7:36:00 AM

    Great job, Daniel....a collection of fine wintery poems!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 7:23:00 AM

    Daniel) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 5:57:00 AM

    Excellent write, merits first place win, congrats Daniel. One love, Joy (Jew)

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 5:00:00 AM

    congrats on your winning 1st position. with these wonderful poems, Harry

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 4:23:00 AM

    OOh, I love this Dan!! Congratulations on your first place win in Irma's contest :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 3:54:00 AM

    Congratulations Dan On your 1st Place win in Irma's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 11:07:00 PM

    Well yoou covered this brilliantly. Congratulations on your no. 1 spot. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 9:49:00 PM

    These sure are wonderful haiku, Dan!! Way to go on your awesome win with these! I also love the word play you did for your title-- way to go!! ^_^ -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 8:40:00 PM

    YEAAAA!!!! YOu got first place. Congratulations, Daniel, VERY well deserved. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 8:33:00 PM

    Congrats Dan on your first place win in the Snow contest with this super write.. enjoy my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 7:57:00 PM

    Many congratulations, in my contest Daniel, loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 8:59:00 PM

    These are all really fun to read, DAniel. I am sure you will do in the contest. I have a question for you. Soupmail!

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 10:22:00 AM

    good imagery on all haiku's,, I really enjoyed the second one it was cute,, enjoyed reading Daniel,...p.d.

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:41:00 AM

    Brilliant use of descriptive imagery in all of these poems, Daniel! It was a joy to think of the snow blanket replacing the morning due, Jack Frost painting the world with winter colors and especially the children creating snow angels. You also gave me a laugh with the haku about "shovel time." Best wishes in the snow contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 8:54:00 AM

    Wonderful set of Haikus Dan for the contest.. especially luv the Snow Angel as I collect Angels and they are dear to me.. part of the family ... good luck my friend with this lovely entry..