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first apartment

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first apartment

Start our life in this new apartment.
Its small, as small as our love started...
all I need is your hands 
and just enough room to dance.

The music starts,
you pull me in.
We're two hearts 
this is where we begin.
This is our, 
our very first apartment.

Such a little world
that you and I both live in.
Just a boy and girl
as green as can be, we begin.
All I need is your hands 
and just enough room to dance.

The music starts,
you pull me in.
We're two hearts,
this is where we begin.
This is our,
our very first...

Such a small world.
What a small world.
We're so little, just you and I.
Promise we'll always be little.
Little love, little world.

All I need is your two strong hands,
and barely enough room at all to dance.

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  1. Date: 8/8/2011 8:27:00 PM
    Congratulations, Joy, on your excellent poem winning the first round. Wish you good luck in the finals. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 8/6/2011 10:47:00 PM
    great poem i loved it

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 10:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Joy. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 9:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Joy. Love, Carol