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Beaten not Forgotten

BEATEN NOT FORGOTTEN
 
Tired of facing reality!
My life is tied and beaten to a pole, like the color black.
Facing life with no possibility.
Facing life's judgment with a brutal attack.
A slave to my own grave, avoiding my sensuality.
Taking a life beat that felt like a whip on my back
I found a way to disowned my responsibility,
Finally, I found that runaway track.
Forgetting who I am, I only feel the flaws of my abnormality.
Finding comfort in a noose, suffocating my own air sac.
Tired of living a life of my own self-brutality.
Falling from a tall tree onto a crack.
In hell, I found myself, to his captivity.
Ending my course, to join another Scat full of piled pack.

Only in hell, they see me as ~ Beaten but never forgotten soul.
At least that is how my story will unfold.
 
~ S ~

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  1. Date: 3/19/2014 12:59:00 AM

    What a poem! I enjoyed every line. I can relate.

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 10:18:00 AM

    SKAT Such a heart wrenching and sorrowful write. I could feel the pain of your soul oozing into every line. Thank you for the great comment on my What Am I poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 11:07:00 PM

    I love this poem SKAT, it is deeply emotional and expressive. I know exactly how you felt when you were writing this one. Amazing work!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it, my friend! Love always, Kelly :)

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 9:27:00 PM

    A good poem you have here SKAT, your life sounds so very sad. ,I could identify with it, my life was once so hopeless, ,thanks for sharing Peter

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 8:29:00 AM

    Wow... great poem you have here... touche!

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 4:34:00 PM

    this is great nice job with it!! great to have you back :) cory

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 5:24:00 PM

    reality can be a b*tch. . but thats the reason why we block ourselves from most of it. forgetting who you are can hurt a lot. great write, Irma. hope all is well. & i wish you a merry christmas with everyone important to you. by the way, i still won't be on a lot, because im moving to some place where i wont be able to access internet.only at school i will be able to get to you,so until i get a lab top, my time is limited for now. take care. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 11:28:00 AM

    awesome' audree

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 3:50:00 PM

    i think you can trancend any mindframe, or persona either imposed upon you or being subconciously explored by you, hope you keep positive Skat, Joe.

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 9:33:00 AM

    SOUP MAIL! :p

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 1:39:00 AM

    a contemporary beat that bristles with punchy lines evoking your " rebel" mood, SKAT... a maverick poet you are.. may i ask if i can do away with the 17 -syllable lines for your SNOW contest as what i did was a modern haiku??.. please clarify.. title is " colors of after dusk snow... thanks for your support!! hope to hear from you! ::) warmest, nette

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 8:02:00 PM

    OH, Irma. I got confused and was thinking your contest was a different one. You are so right, I DID use limericks in your contest after all What a relief!!

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 6:39:00 PM

    Sorry! If this is reality' Love Audree

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 6:11:00 PM

    Wow, Skat, what a power-house poem of emotional pent up feelings....it makes me want to root for you loud enough for you to hear!! :)...............before I forget...many thanks for my placement in your Costume contest...I am honored!! :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 6:02:00 PM

    THANKS EVERYONE :-) so far, I should have entered this poem. As my worst poem ever. I posted this poem, only because I have nothing to share right now. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks for your concern June. yes it might be reality, the beaten part comes from myself. LOVE~ SKAT

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 4:57:00 PM

    Wow! what a loaded write this is Skat! I really like how much strength you show in this write despite being "beaten"--I don't think you are-- hugs nikko :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 3:19:00 PM

    Well this write is most fantastic Irma my BFF and sweet friend..so dear.. enjoy your awesome poetry and hope this is far from reality of your own life luv... amazing lines of expression quite impressive to all readers luv... appreciate my 6th place in your cool contest.. a joy to write for u my friend.. hope u had a wonderful Thanksgiving Day.. blessings to u luv.. your BFF...always...

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 2:48:00 PM

    Dear SKAT.Sometimes life's like hell on earth.It's full of challenges.But we do have a human endowment that we can use ,the will to live.I have used it and continue to use it,as so have others through time.And the will to live means that, to live, not just to exist.I'm in a vulnerable place myself right now.But I'm not alone. Other's are suffering too and inspire me with their courage not to be beaten.These are strong words,they cut to the heart and hurt for you and all in pain. Love June

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 1:51:00 PM

    Slave to my own grave, scary, beaten is a terrible place to be, appreciated it. PS. thanks for letting me know results were posted, I didn't even know where they were and spent quite some time searching :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 1:20:00 PM

    Deep and meaningful expressions. Our life is such SKAT. XCheer up and live the life that we have to live once only,

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 10:48:00 AM

    Good one..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 9:27:00 AM

    Hello Skat, Good Morning, deep and interesting perspective. I think we have all been there at one point or another. Good write As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 7:04:00 AM

    "Falling from a tall tree into a crack" This and the last two lines are powerful. Hey! Been there. Done that. Kicked alcohol. Kicked smoking. Damned if I can kick the memories. As always, good write. Love, dave

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 5:33:00 AM

    Mom, stop thinking silly and cheer up Love =(^.^)= Roya

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 5:25:00 AM

    Good morning Skat, life will always have its tough days. (LIN~RA)

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 5:01:00 AM

    Strong words and thoughts,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 4:03:00 AM

    Skat, you threw these lines together in perfect form...great line through out....love the way you write.... luv Michael

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 3:46:00 AM

    a very sad and touchingpoem coming from the heart. Loved the end. Thanks a lot for your comments. They are highly appreciated and deeply felt. Have a wonderful thanksgiving.

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 11:27:00 PM

    a riveting, well-designed work that is marked with deep profundity... fascinating, skat! thanks for dropping by my little shop of words::) and CONGRATS for being featured this week on soup..warmest, nette

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 10:07:00 PM

    happy thanksgiving what err that is we don't have it in Australia Ms thank u 4 your nice comment lived a different life when ere i went looks like rain i smell it now ... dodge n sidestep your doom yow... Don

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