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THE PRESENT TENSE

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THE PRESENT TENSE


MODERN  DOUBLE HAIKU


don’t hurry today!
surrender hands oven burned 
before tiny tots come

tomorrow not sure
could be black white red or none
today, kiss love sun!


(( happy thanksgiving to all!!))

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  1. Date: 12/9/2010 10:02:00 PM
    Yes! Happy to all of us, Nette I just read your comment on my blog. That is cute that you asked where am I. Well i'm the one in back of my daughter silly. Have a nice one*LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 10:24:00 AM
    loved this one hope you had a happy one as well and of course enjoy your black friday lol,, this is a hectic day for shoppers and workers,, enjoy your weekend..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 1:23:00 AM
    Awesome uplifting write Nette, so much enjoyed this morning.. Hope you are having a good day :) Wilma

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 10:28:00 PM
    WAs that last one about getting beaten up in the stores? haha. Hey, Nette, are you from U.S? for some reason I was thinking you were from another place. And yet you seem very aware of what happens the day after Thanksgiving. Oh, are you not Phillipino? Well, I enjoyed these find haiku tonight. You are my last poet to see tonight. Time for me to get out of here. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 8:05:00 PM
    ENJOYED & LOVED IT ,THE SAME TO YOU, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 8:47:00 AM
    Enjoyed your creative write today Nette my friend.. and a very H.T.Day to u and yours also.. feel the LUV...luv..

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 12:53:00 AM
    So joyful, Nette! Thanks so much for sharing this uplifting poem. Happy Thanksgiving to you! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/24/2010 10:40:00 PM
    mangoes definitely are the best 'no? Mango cream pie or sliced as it is works for me :) happy for you that you are enjoying it here so much-- :D-- pasko na nga!! kelangan ko na nga ilabas mga christmas decors-- ok gotta go for now-- see you around Nette & thanks as well for your lovely comments-- :) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 11/24/2010 10:30:00 PM
    yikes, the holidays sure can be stressful-- but haha I live for that stuff!wish you the best in the contest :) --nikko :)