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DISSOLUTION by DIVORCE

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DISSOLUTION by DIVORCE

Great joy together...

Hearts now torn by love and hate...

Solution: Divorce.



It all began with "For Better or Worse",

But the words afterward became very terse.

Divorce was the answer she decided upon

As with me she didn't want to go on...

The only other answer was to ride a hearse.



Two people in love end up in court and for a divorce sue,
It would never have happened...had they not said, "I Do"!


(Top - Haiku, Middle - Limerick, Bottom - Single Couplet)
For Poet Destroyer's Divorce Club Contest

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  1. Date: 12/2/2010 3:05:00 PM

    Very nice my friend...congrats to you also...

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 2:29:00 PM

    I give you the top mark for the middle as it has unique rhyme and it has dour, dry wit! Thanks as always and best wishes from Gerard

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 12:56:00 PM

    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Daniel

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 9:15:00 AM

    I like the line the only answer was to ride a hearse, excellent, it shows why divorce happened, enjoyed this set, congrats on your win:)

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 7:11:00 AM

    Daniel) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 6:36:00 AM

    Congrats Dan on your big win in P.D.'s great contest with this brilliant write and entry on divorce my friend.. enjoy another top ten win with luv..

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 5:55:00 AM

    Congratulations Dan for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:00:00 PM

    I really liked that couplet. IT sums it all up so nicely!

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 8:33:00 PM

    Hi Daniel! Good luck in the contest with your entry...Divorce is sooo sad so many can relate..but peace can come after. Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 8:55:00 PM

    "I Do" love the couplet so much~best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

  1. Date: 11/24/2010 7:26:00 AM

    We always hope for happy endings, but we don't always get them, Daniel. Much sadness in this poem but I like the humor in the line about the "hearse." Best wishes in the contest with this moving poem. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 4:21:00 PM

    Dan it turned out wonderfully well my friend.. good luck again in P.D.'s contest.. luv the Limerick and the hearse line.. an interesting contest she has given as a challenge to us.. enjoy your holiday luv..

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 12:49:00 PM

    Very frolicking and funny write yet with a serious thought, Daniel

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 12:38:00 PM

    Hello, Daniel, here again~ not reading,, just scoping out the entries,, but,, i did notice you did not add the word *divorce* to your title.. I would hate to pass this one up.... did get a good read on your couplet, and i sure loved it.. Try (( Divorce DISSOLUTION! )) still it is up to you if you want to add it to your title.. Enjoyed and have yourself a wonderful day,, and you got all 3 forms perfect,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 12:10:00 PM

    well expressed daniel. wish you the best in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 8:58:00 AM

    I wonder is that the solution..Good work writing it.Sara

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 6:35:00 AM

    Super write Dan .. enjoyed your take on the divorce theme.. is this your entry for P.D.'s contest ..because u will need to add the Limerick and Couplet parts as well to qualify luv.. good luck..