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LAST CONCLUSION

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LAST CONCLUSION

~           JUDGEMENT          ~ 

~~  teeth deep in the ground
~~~ alligator skin like knifes 
~~~~~~ listening to lies

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 1:37:00 AM

    yes love

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 5:20:00 AM

    Another well written Haiku!!!! you have mastered this form my dear....always Michael

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 10:01:00 PM

    This pierces sharply!

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 9:24:00 AM

    Great picture you've penned here! Have a nice week!...Gert

  1. Date: 12/30/2010 6:38:00 AM

    enjoyed this, Harry

  1. Date: 12/30/2010 1:59:00 AM

    It is more than beautiful a remarkable sketch on Judgment. So deep and so true. Thanks for your appreciation of Rain, the Story. Love and best wishes for the new year 2011....Ravindra

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 8:02:00 AM

    Powerful

  1. Date: 12/12/2010 2:48:00 AM

    Wow, there's a picture...check out my first blog posting, Hathor

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:41:00 PM

    oooooh, this is really nice!!

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 6:49:00 AM

    A well deserved featured poem you have here Hathor. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 8:32:00 PM

    How very interesting and true, good work

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 8:03:00 AM

    what depth and powerful use of metaphors, hathor! beautiful.. thanks for coming by my poetic cave with your generous remarks on my"divorce" poem.. warmest, nette

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 7:57:00 AM

    Thought provoking Lin Ra ;) enjoyed it! Enjoy your weekend, Wilma

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 7:01:00 AM

    i'm not a mind reader

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 7:59:00 PM

    LOVE IT,, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

  1. Date: 11/24/2010 4:33:00 PM

    Happy thanksgiving day, Ammut

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 12:59:00 PM

    menaingful haiku with good images, Hathor

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 11:25:00 AM

    Hello Hathor Ammut, Wow, this is deep but I love it... Well Done As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 9:01:00 AM

    Interesting work..Sara