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My Sudoku Life

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My Sudoku Life

And I walk
across numerical figments
speaking hyperbole dialect to their imaginations.

Numb, blocky gaps
whisper invitation to secret club.

Enticing my stature
to belong
to become exponent’s side-kick.

So they can welcome me with open arms.

Coating my digits with inoperable tumors
double-knotted in hot pink laced bow
and baby-breath scent.

They even left a Walmart Rollback smiley face sticker
with crack residue on right cheek
and a comic-style bubble caption, “welcome home puppet”.

Yes!

This is exactly how Mother 1 told me it would be.

Kinda like marriage,
but less detail-oriented.

But, I could never fit in.

For I am neither positive
nor negative
about their (cult) ural ways.

Timing would always be off.

An arm from the clock that suffered a stroke at Midnight…

They’d never understand,
how they’d alter this unevenly, odd numerical figment.

For they’ll just calculate,
deduce,
my sum with rusty protractor.

This Zero, into a fraction...

© Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 4/4/2014 9:04:00 PM
    Well written this is! "They even left a Walmart Rollback smiley face sticker with crack residue on right cheek and a comic-style bubble caption, “welcome home puppet”." -Love that stanza and the last lines! So good! Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 3:59:00 PM
    Well we'll Sudoku together until they realize we are not boring enough to just "fit it!" lol love it Drake! Love Sudoku too!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/28/2014 12:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's...awesome. :) Thank you kindly, F.J.!!!! =D
  1. Date: 1/10/2014 2:21:00 PM
    Ha ha, I used to play Sudoku, too. I love how you incorporated the game of Sudoku into real life.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/10/2014 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    =D Thank you for that, Juliet! The theme behind this was a request from an old friend of mine. I had a field day when she suggested the topic of the request. =)
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:33:00 AM
    cool lines: zero into a fraction and a clock that suffered a stroke at midnight. I just loved that!!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/26/2013 5:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome! Thanks so much, Andrea!! =D
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 4:59:00 PM
    My daughter is / was into sudoku for a while,,,,,, yes wandering is better then wondering, even though you say either way is good ;} glad you liked it Delights" ;}

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/16/2013 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome! I kinda like that game too. :) Yes, either way WAS good. ;) Thanks, Debbie! Great to see you pass by here!
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 10:34:00 PM
    Being a sudoku addict in the past I couldn't help but click on this... lol. I'm not sure if I read this right, but I felt a very strong urge to not conform to the ways your family wants you to be. Trying to puzzle you out when the puzzle is unsolvable... I get that vibe anyway. It's a very elaborate piece to say the least.. fitting for your personality! I once wrote a long poem about how my life connected with numbers called Counting Down... it was a challenge, but that's what makes writing fun.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/16/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The theme of this poem was actually a "request" piece by an old friend of mine a few years ago. I love Sudoku too. So, I figured, why not? You're on the right track with the direction I was going in. Though, it wasn't about my family trying to change me or anything. :) Many thanks to you coming by again!!! :)
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 3:08:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, I enjoyed this very much

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/16/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi there! Nice to meet you! Thanks very much!
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 4:08:00 PM
    This is very captivating, I kept going back and noticing more and more intricacies. Fine job

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/22/2013 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there! Good to meet you. Many thanks on you stopping by. :)
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Late bus, me, but this is such a fine write. Belated congratulations.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 3/22/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Michael! Better late than pregnant, I always say! :) Many thanks!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Pleasure reading your poem today, congrats on your win, love debra

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 3/22/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for that! :)
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:52:00 PM
    Drake..:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 3/22/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Gracias!!! :)
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 4:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win. It is a real gem! Very cleverly written! Hugs!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/21/2012 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!!!!!! :)
  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:36:00 PM
    Congratulations on oyur win in this contest.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:13:00 PM
    This is crafted marvelously,Drake.Congratulations!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Drake. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 6:34:00 PM
    ((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 3:06:00 AM
    Awesome poem, Drake! Congratulations on your win in the International contest! I am in Florida on vacation right now. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:14:00 AM
    Congrats Drake on your win!!!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 6:42:00 PM
    So unique and clever are you!! I love this gem! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/30/2012 7:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey hey Carrie!!! That means a lot. Truly. :) Thanks!
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:37:00 PM
    very powerful writing, drake. Congratulations on your success in the contest. i enjoyed this one.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/30/2012 7:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Andrea!!! :) Thank you! And to you too as well!!!
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