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Coma

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Below is the poem entitled Coma which was written by poet Joshua Hart. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Coma

want to lie here forever
in this place where you never leave
hidden here for so long
fate made you breathe
made me find you all over again

to wake is to hurt
unconscious is comfort
where i never have to let you go

forever is not long enough
i will hold you till time can no longer be measured
till we both forget that this isn't reality
till I no longer have to wake from sleep

drowning in this coma
water composed of you
won't fight the waves
won't hold my breath
just let go into you
so i never have to let you go again

J.Hart 12/08/09

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  1. Date: 5/20/2011 12:06:00 AM
    Joshua... CONGRATULATIONS:-) !! on your wonderful featured poem of this this week. Take care and God bless,.. Linda

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, joshua

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 1:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured write this week joshua. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 8:48:00 PM
    I really really like this way to go Fantastic

  1. Date: 11/24/2010 10:36:00 AM
    Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Mr. Hart. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 8:20:00 PM
    Thank you Linda

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 8:09:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun... check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv...