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"Drawing Enemies"

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"Drawing Enemies"

A beatifull evening
Unlocking horizon
Burying fantazies
Deadly arrows flying trough
Fearsome enemies
Breaking our hold
Giving up on front lines
Is a face of ice
Cold for winter
Warm for summer
Wine drinks the mans heart
Knowlege comes from the outher heaven
Blood stands still
For a splash on wall
Devils giving up
Tomorrow my enemy is yours
A well line draws a beatiful war
Don't so afraid of dying tonight
Is not going inside our home
But outside were our children plays
Letter in ashes falling on the sea
Pens with out ink
Darkness keeps hold
Light is giving up on us
There's no more respect on today's face
I declared war agaisn't my friends and family
So i am the enemy
Everybody is drawing their own enemy
You were never born with one
So you must die with a million?
From childhood we unfold war's agaisn't other blood
Aren't we all brothers?
Safe your prayers and pretty words
Im back with my eyes folded
Taking innocents and sinners
Like you did with my life
I dig my way down home
You shot your way down home
I guess we drew our last enemy...

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  1. Date: 11/19/2010 5:19:00 PM
    So enjoyed your creative write tonight .. happy weekend with luv...