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MONEY AND APTITUDE

Fortunately, Unfortunately
that the sun set into ones live
They set the still subsisting world 
cerebral right 
to you nothing is worthwhile 
sighing for ? 
when stark then trade in cowrie 
within and let the hombres 
slump 

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  1. Date: 1/25/2011 10:05:00 AM

    I like the way you handled this one it's a great contrast between money and ability. I'll take the latter every time.

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 6:25:00 PM

    Great words from an African pen. this is an outstanding piece. You have a soupmail. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Thanks for your great words to me Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 12:12:00 PM

    Very interesting first two liines..I am glad that I chose this one to read this day..I was delighted that you stopped by my work..Sara