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Below is the poem entitled WORST HIP HOPPIN' RAP LINES which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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what's goin on here
yeah yo hot momma and yo soul sistah
fightin and  freakin
smilin then pic-pac-pic-pac wrestlin
and you makin me go go go
to start another smokin show, 
c'mon lousy dudes
bombin away from all the swoosh
stinkin candy messin down  usher soup
if ya ain't in the groove, go darn losers..move!
better hip it up sloppy studs
ya , ya  wazzup, monster burpin blobs

( geez...i'll understand if you want to clobber me... lol!)

...for PD's hilarious " my worst poem ever"
and #1 poem contest

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:39:00 PM

    NETTE, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:26:00 AM

    Too funny Nette.. Enjoyed the rapping. Congrats on the fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 5:42:00 PM

    Yeah, whazzup sweet soul sistah NetEEE!...This is hot an BOMBIN' stuff mama, and congrads yo! - The Timstah

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 1:46:00 AM

    I liked this then and I like it now. It's a riot, sweetie. Congrats.

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:06:00 AM

    Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 11:35:00 AM

    hahaha stinkin candy messin down usher soup Hilarious congratulations yo rapper on yas big win.

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 10:47:00 PM

    Eeuuwwww- Congrats anyhu to you

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 6:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your 1st Place win in PD'S contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 8:04:00 PM

    Hahah Nette an absolute monster. Many congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 2:11:00 PM

    haha, it's so bad I thought you did it just for the contest. I give it my personal first place! heehee. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 1:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in this great contest..Sara

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 12:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on this well deserved win, nette

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 11:54:00 AM

    Way to go Nette ...number one my friend.. enjoy that top spot for the worst poem ever written..luv.. your amazing talent is so evident on the Soup.. continue entertaining us ..luv.. enjoy your well deserved win and placement..

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 10:35:00 AM

    Nette...congrats on big win.......... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 9:43:00 AM

    yo there funky rapper beltin this blues with a hammer thankin you for makin me a sucker amazin first prize blooper! :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 8:41:00 AM

    Nette, this is so funny for the attemp, but i kno you can reverse it to good lines,,lol,,CONGRATULATIONS!!! Had lots of fun with this contest,, have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 8:24:00 AM

    Nette, super congratulations on your first place in Pd's contest. Enjoyed this ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 6:50:00 AM

    Dear Nettie, you got something here, caught a feeling with monster burpin blobs, and thanks so much for your kind words re my "Soft Morning" Take a look at my new "bird Talk" if you want corn ball Thanks Jim Gibbons

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 8:22:00 AM

    If I read you right - I'd hate to be sitting by these dudes at the movies. Got a kick out of this one, nette. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 11:45:00 PM

    thank you everyone for laughing at this at my own expense, hahaha! really had fun with all of you.. warmest, nette

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 5:44:00 PM

    Hmmm, it sounds like a normal rap song to me. heeheehee. (as you can see, I am not a fan of rap music) but i bet you have come up with some raps that I might be able to like. I hope you have anyway! I bet P.D will love this one in her contest. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 1:43:00 PM

    Very awesome write, nette, Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 11:50:00 AM

    Good luck in the contest with this unusual one..Reads like a winner..I apprecitate the kind comments on my work (Joy To Different Seasons)..Sara

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 10:57:00 AM

    seems like one crazy poem to me, all the best with this, and thanks for the lines you sent me by Pablo Nerudo Nette.i do think the train one sounds familiar mabye i have heard it on a documentry and was only half listening.

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 7:10:00 AM

    Got a good laugh from your lingo, Nette! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 7:00:00 AM

    Good Luck.. Nette... on the worst poem for P.D. .. I also dug deep into my portfolio was so fun.. happy to have chosen your entry for Poetry was moving and luv the excitement of getting it in on time... great job luv.. be blessed this happy day... good luck luv..

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 6:14:00 AM

    Hi Nette.I love this made me laugh so much in fact I'm still laughing.Some of it completely over my head!But it's fun.Where did you get that line "monster burping blobs"?Great write.Good luck with it in the contest.Love June

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 5:58:00 AM

    usher and will smith, you made me do this..:)