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ALONE

I DON’T  WANT TO LOOK AT UR FACE,
LEAVE ME ALONE…GO AWAY!!
WHY YOU ARE ALWAYS THERE IN MY MIND?
IT WAS DIFFICULT TO MATCH YOUR PACE…

THERE WAS A TIME WEN YOU BECAME A PART OF MY SOUL,
BUT NOW MY HEART IS LEFT BEHIND WITH A HOLE.
YOU CAME BACK IN THE RAIN,
TO HURT ME AGAIN,
I CAN'T  TAKE IT ANY MORE.
I ONLY TRAMP,
I WAS CRAMPED,
TRYING TO REACH THE SHORE!!!

MY LIFE HAS BECOME CUMULUS,
THROUGH WHICH I CAN'T SEE.
I AM LOST…..LOST IN THE FIRE,
I DON'T WANT TO KEEP MEMORIES OF THEE.

IT WAS A PERFECT ILLUSION,
WHICH HAS NOW FADED AWAY.
NOW I AM FACING THE TRUTH,
AS THE MIRROR SAYS.

I WALK LONELY ON THE EMPTY ROADS IN THE NIGHT,
PRETENDING TO BE OKAY.
JST LYK A KITE,
WHOSE STRING IS CUT ,
IT WAS WORTHLESS.

PAST MOMENTS ALWAYS DO ASK ME
WHY WE GOT APART?
BUT….I AM NOT ABLE TO ANSWER,
EITHER ON UR OR ON MY PART.
ALL MY DREAMS GOT VANISHED,
SOMEWHERE IN THE FOG.
U KEPT WALKING AHEAD ON UR WAY,
I WANT YOUR MEMORIES ALSO TO DO THE SAME.
LEAVE ME ALONE!!! GO AWAY!!GO AWAY!!
~~~~~@!<@!\!!<$!-!@  Priy@

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  1. Date: 12/22/2010 4:46:00 AM
    HAV A MORE POSITIVE ENDING .... WELL NEWAZ .. GUD WORK ...,

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 12:00:00 AM
    thank you all for ur sweet comments....& yes i wud lyk to take part in contest ..can ny1 give some info abt it???

  1. Date: 12/13/2010 10:24:00 AM
    really touching...i can feel the pain you have going through

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 12:31:00 AM
    can feel the hurt

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 1:05:00 PM
    Akanksha, I felt your emotion, so strong, so real. And 'you kept walking ahead on ur way, I want your memories also to do the same.' That highlights the writer in you. However, the use of small letters would have made your diction more appealing. Welcome to poetrysoup!

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 8:43:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Akanksha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 8:23:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry today with its very creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contests offered to members.. good luck with luv..

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 3:18:00 PM
    very strong emotion in this, enjoyed,..P.D.

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 9:44:00 AM
    nice ..........very deep thoght.......and specially the last part "u kept walking ahead...................want ur memories...............do the same"......