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Timeless

I write this for a reason
From a mans point of view...
So let me take a moment
And say what I feel....

Love is an emotion
I endeavor to feel
From the depths of my soul
But it's not her....and show
How my kindness of heart
I bestow....and yet
She takes her leave...

Not caring how I feel
She says I can't
Be the man that she will
Ever need....Money...she needs
But I say...so simply
Say..... 

Sleep with me
And forget......all the
Rest.....


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  1. Date: 11/7/2010 6:19:00 AM

    Very dark and sensuous write.. money she needs..........Randall

  1. Date: 11/7/2010 4:01:00 AM

    This is a very good poem, simple, emotionally stunning. Sad perspective. raskin