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"An Attempt to Write"

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"An Attempt to Write"

I see
 people
but i can't see
myself
i see
parts of their
pain
and mine is
almost the 
same
I think
life isn't
sane
we're all
just 
a bunch of
grain
making
this whole world
rain
leaving, all that remains
one droplet of
our souls behind
A memory of us
 that falls onto one 
long line
embedded and weaved
out from time
seeking a new life
burning up minds

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  1. Date: 11/5/2010 9:00:00 PM

    I think the same thing some times, but not nearly as poetically as you. This is really amazing.