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One true sentence

One sentence, written as true as you know it,
An understanding conveyed as sincerely as you feel it...
The sand flows through my fingers,
And the water droplet sticks on to my skin,
Fleeting thoughts and impressions seep in slowly...
My writing awakens me from within.
I am not what I used to be before this word was written,
I create, I search, I struggle to live, constantly changing,
Time and 'I' lose its meaning, my words remain and return.

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  1. Date: 9/7/2012 10:33:00 AM
    A belated thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Girish. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 7:01:00 PM
    Simply Beautiful. Succinct sublime short yet meaningful. I wish we all could just forget the meaning of"I". Let only "US" and ours prevail

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 9:55:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading the many diverse poems here today. I am glad to have came across your amongst these wonderful poems Girish. Wishing you a magnificent weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/4/2010 2:46:00 PM
    Quite an self introspective thoughts you have penned - Time and I lose its meaning nice expression, Girish. Happy Diwali

  1. Date: 11/4/2010 9:26:00 AM
    Like a breath of fresh air, this poem causes me to inhale deeply, Girish! Exquisite piece to read this afternoon. Hope you and your family are well..This goes to my favs 'cause I want to read it again. Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 11/4/2010 8:25:00 AM
    I am because I sense, think, feel, love and persevere. You have a beautiful thought provoking work here... enjoyed!