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The Wall

When I first met you, you were full of pain, so you built up a wall,
and you hid inside, but your life was dark, and you lived in vain.

When you discovered I loved you, and you found out how deep,
that wall began to crumble, and now it's just a heap.

With no wall between us, life has been swell, no longer are you
living in an infernal hell.

Every day I want to sing, and thank the Lord for all He brings,
my love remains ever true, and each passing day I still love you.

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  1. Date: 11/2/2010 7:09:00 PM

    exceptional.i enjoyed it.fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 11:20:00 AM

    Sena this is a sure beauty. I use to build walls so this one rings true in so many ways! Enjoyed this ;)

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 5:05:00 PM

    I'm a lucky man, I mean his a luck man to have you :-) you have the gift of the tongue. Sweeeeet