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2nd Blog-ish

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2nd Blog-ish

I'll have to put off writing my bio because there's something I'd like to ask of you soupers...:)

You might have already seen the notice beneath a few of my recent poems, but I'll post the 
same content here: 

I'd really appreciate it if you could give me some really hard-core critical feedback on my 
writing. The people on this site are so nice and their comments always give me such 
encouragement, but I would love some critical comments as well. 

Hope this isn't me being too greedy ;)

Will count on you all!

-G

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  1. Date: 11/1/2010 10:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Grace. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/31/2010 8:04:00 PM
    Congrats Grace on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 12:20:00 AM
    Hi Grace :) I don't think you're greedy at all-- it's actually so cool of you to want to get more critical feedback for your poems-- & Andrea's right too! & ha I may not be as brave as you-- this reminded me of this site that I was a super-short time member of (years ago) & I checked on it again & it's still there-- I'll soupmail it to you but be warned-- they even give warning there of how mean they could be it's actually more of like a poetry workshop? & Chris, start sweeping, haha!--nikko

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 9:24:00 AM
    Cont'd--Andrea did mention how there is a critique area in the Forums. I completely understand if you want some feedback here in the general posting area, because the forums are 'dead' for days on end....I can see the dust and cobwebs in the hallways when I enter haha!~Chris

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 9:23:00 AM
    Grace, I tried the SAME thing you did here....I put up posts explaining how much I enjoy the positive comments, but if people wanted to critique my work, I would really, really be grateful. Of course, nothing happened. The few who did offer critiques many months later, didn't offer any tangible solutions, but simply went on confusing rants that in the end, was just a glorification of their already overblown egos.

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 7:17:00 AM
    I'll tell you why I don't do it here. The times I have done this kind of thing, the people got really hurt. Even though I tried to do it as nicely as possible. Even some poets who may ask for it, in the end, they feel disappointed when you point things out. That is why I think most people don't offer critiques. Did you know they have a forum here for you to go and be critiqued? Go check it out! I bet it would be perfect for you. In a rush, will try to read some poems of yours later. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 5:35:00 AM
    Grace, are you sure you can take it?? LOL