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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/16/2010 4:50:00 PM
Long time gone??? So where are you? We miss you. Light & Love
Hitendra Mehta
Date: 11/25/2010 3:48:00 AM
Thnx Syed for visiting my work "Die as if lived forever" and leaving encouraging comments.... ....Luv/best wishes..... Hitendra Mehta
binibining P.iNk
Date: 11/24/2010 1:13:00 PM
What a gripping and haunting write this is Amaan :) Enjoyed reading this and of how that old ink bottle could be the hold the ghost of your uncle-- :) --nikko :)
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/22/2010 10:14:00 PM
Haunting and compelling, Syed. I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea
Sidney Hall Mad Poet
Date: 11/4/2010 4:04:00 PM
Amaan this is an amazing piece, the memories it tells. brilliant
Tahera Mannan
Date: 11/4/2010 6:06:00 AM
Mr. Syed Amaan this is an amazing rhyme. The last line is superb in depth and meaning. Thanks for your kind comments on my work. God Bless.
James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/3/2010 8:41:00 AM
Syed....your last stanza sparkles with unsaid brilliance (room for the reader)....truly, the markers of a good poem.....the last line.....memorable, to mine favs, jimbo
Wilma Neels
Date: 10/31/2010 3:34:00 AM
Amaan you sure paint an interesting image with your words, sure is a fascinating poem. Hope your weekend's been good ;) Wilma
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/21/2010 8:02:00 AM
Amaan, you have created quite an image of your uncle's old writing room. There are some people gifted with "psychometry," the ability to know the history of an inanimate object by touching it. History can be tied to objects like the ink bottle and fountain pens. Very creative poem! Love, Carolyn
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/20/2010 11:04:00 AM
Good afternoon Amaan. The weekend and half this week are gone and this is the first I have had a chance to read. Had so much drama in my life. Really feeling good reading poetry today. Glad yours was among them. Love, Carol
Doris Culverhouse
Date: 10/20/2010 5:48:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/19/2010 6:50:00 PM
Amaan, deep and hollow imagination, truly wonderful ways of putting all the rattling sounds in your poem. The unknown places, and echoes, lost in a memoty no one heard, enjoyed,..p.d.
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/19/2010 5:17:00 PM
What a nice memories recollected in tranquility, Amaan
Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 10/19/2010 5:16:00 PM
Amaan, this is a very neat poem. I know that science etc, gets in the way of my imagination and thoughts, but I wonder about the ghosts within inanimate objects~Chris
Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/19/2010 3:11:00 PM
Enjoyed this one...I can see your uncle sitting and writing...Cobwebs on the chair and surroundings....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara