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Rapid Tongues of Flames

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Rapid Tongues of Flames

Your eyes are like two diamonds I fell into from far away
The steepness of them drowned me to the coolest point 
I fell and hurt myself, but kept on walking to find your heart
Like red rivers under the ice your blood flows so swiftly
It kept on growing intense under my bare frustrated feet
Which drag me deep inside to the middle of your frozen heart
That spreads the red-hot blood I once have dipped my vein into
It stung so badly, but I bared the pain for your love.	

I went too deep inside, I could feel the air beating the frozen feelings
Straight into my heart, they went and killed me with just an inhale
Right at the moment I stepped on the spot, where it used to hurt
Where I left myself, helpless, fragile, the me you knew before
Before it all ended with you dying on the floor
That we made together once, but you broke the law
To keep the ice away, far enough to pray the religion we created once 
Not twice, impossible the fragments of it were
We learnt them by heart, and we saved them from the God.

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  1. Date: 10/20/2010 2:12:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup ... enjoyed reading your poetry today and its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest scene offered to new members ..good luck with luv..

  1. Date: 10/20/2010 10:22:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dayana. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol