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I want to break free

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I want to break free

I laugh, I live
Although I know
Something big is missing.

My whole existence
is fading away
into a dark abyss.

My own conscience
has been betrayed by me
every now and then.

Deep inside me
there is shame and remorse
but i cannot show it at all.

The shackles of reality
bind to me tightly
I want to break free.

All I ask for
Is one chance of freedom
Oh!Someone break me free.

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  1. Date: 10/19/2010 11:33:00 AM
    Thank you Chris for understanding. I really feel at home here. True is the saying that "A man can live fully in his dreams" Thank you all here in poetrysoup for your kindness and gratitude.

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 10:56:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup, Bidyut! I can relate to many aspects of your poem here....in the end it is up to your heart to set you free. Other people may be included in the steps, but it is yourself that holds the key in the end.

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 10:07:00 AM
    there's always that one missing link to us, a break from it all is what we need, nice one enjoyed Bidyut,..P.D.

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 9:11:00 AM
    Thank you carol and dr. ram for your comments. I really appreciate that you take your time to read my poems.

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 8:42:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Bidyut. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 8:35:00 AM
    Very powerful feelings you have penned to get away from the hurries and worries of life, bidyut