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the witch and the prince

the old witch, wicked?
had yet to be determined
lured five brave men to

her wedding bed and 
five less brave men down the isle
of divorce. was it 

the long scar down her 
crooked nose, wiry long hair
streaming off of the 

dark mole on her snarled
lower lip? Was it her huge 
hips, nasty morn breath?

we will never know
for now she has found her bliss
the prince placed the kiss

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  1. Date: 10/15/2010 5:25:00 AM

    Enjoyed the story, not too keen on the way the sentences were broken across verses, gald I read it though

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 5:19:00 AM

    Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Kristi. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 8:45:00 PM

    awesome Kristi, truly enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 6:45:00 AM

    Good discription of the ugly witch. But the men?