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Don't Come

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Don't Come

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     I don't want your fingerprints ...
     


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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 3:25:00 PM
    This is passionate, heartfelt, and easily conveys a real emotion. I loved reading it! good work!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 3:02:00 PM
    Ruben, had to come and see for myself. I've read your posts here and there and liked your sense of humor. Never read a poem...Here I am. I'm VERY impressed. I so like the get even feel of this....Like...when you HAD the chance....you blew it away. This is a tremendous write. Great job

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 10:33:00 AM
    ...in the silence of your room of desire... gem

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Hey Rueben, go read my new contest info and read the blog please, I could use some help. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:05:00 PM
    I was totally captivated by the powerful "I've had enough" feel but written so eloquently. Must be why it's on theTop 100 All-Time list. Excellent writing :)

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:39:00 PM
    this is complete and final banishment. Done with the power of a king. Excellent and congratulations on it being one of the Top 100. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 8:22:00 PM
    Nice work! I like the reality of this poem.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:17:00 AM
    I meant: one of the more famous poems of the Soup. And nothing about the comment below is sarcastic, including wot I mentioned about the hybridization of open verse and prose. I like it when that happens(with a good tone), and I think you should write more poems that incorporate this style(try out different themes?).

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Ah yes, one the more infamous poems of the Soup. I remember this poem; remember how much I enjoyed reading it. Wot I realize more now, is how to me this isn't straight-forward free verse/open verse, but a hybridization of free verse and prose(to me). I mean this as a compliment. For quite a while, I have been intrigued by fusing free verse with prose(purple prose?). This will always be one of the best poems that you have written.

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 5:00:00 PM
    How many of us have said this to ourselves. You put it into words beautifully.

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Wonderful poem, Ruben... overflowing with feeling... Terry

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 4:13:00 AM
    It causes a certain movement in my soul every time I read it.A poem that reaches to that realm is no doubt a good one.bravo Ruben.Thank you for speaking the language of truth.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Who could not be touched with the emotional pain expressed in this poem? I think you speak for many as well as yourself Ruben. It is an outpouring of soul and will move anyone reading it. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 9:23:00 PM
    Reuben, definitely written from a heart that's burdened with pain, dissapointment and frustration. Love this as I respect a man who knows what he wants and says it even though it may hurt as hell...An exceptional poem...well done! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 8:40:00 AM
    I'm just taking a moment to re-read one of the most amazing poems.....as if it were the first time.... It beats like a drum, and blows me away with the rythmn of finality and raw expression... I am once again in awe..

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 5:12:00 AM
    I love the simplicity of your words, and how not spoon feed everything about the situation makes that one can not tear them self away because they long to know more. It is raw emotion at it's best

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:03:00 PM
    Ruben, here goes a wow, for yourself... this is deep, and harsh.. but i figure it is all for reasons.. I really did enjoy this poem. Another thought in another lifetime, is awesome. I wonder if the feelings will still feel the effect that was opposed on you during this tainted memory.... Anyways ~ I enjoyed this one, and now I'm adding it on my favorite list ;- )... PD

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 8:15:00 PM
    Can I come and leave a message?....to pen these emotions is a talent alone! To be the recipient of these words, can scar a soul for a lifetime. POETRY AT ITS BEST!!!

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:28:00 PM
    wow, you are really high on the list too. and I see you thanked me and Debs on here . HOw nice of you, Ruben. I almost forgot about this it was long ago, wasn't it? soupmail for ya.

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 5:15:00 AM
    What a write [though of course I don't remember what I did to help, I'm sure it wasn't much] you can not write with such passion and then expect women not to come ;) I need to read your writes more often as a pallete cleanser! ;) Light & Love

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