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This Time

This time I close my eyes
But now they're opened wide
To all of the things that blind
To all of the things that obscure my sight

This time I face the truth
To all of the obstacles thrown in plain view
To all of the visible clues
Of everything I have to lose

This time I can breathe
Now the air is clear and clean
For a future I can believe
Now my soul is truly free

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  1. Date: 10/5/2010 1:07:00 PM

    Well expressed thoughts with nice images, Jodie

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 11:09:00 AM

    A pleasure to read your poetry today Jodie. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 9:06:00 AM

    well stated, flowing, decisive, strong ... thank you, chuck