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MORNING MIST

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MORNING MIST




The earth greets me shrouded in mystery All of her charms veiled to my sight. Then slowly,tantalisingly Swirling in seductive Salome dance She offers herself glimpse by glimpse. Until once again she stands before me Fully revealed in all her breathtaking beauty.

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  1. Date: 3/17/2011 11:02:00 PM

    marvellous imagery and nice alliteration....I liked it very much....it deserves to be featured

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 6:20:00 PM

    Congrats Sylvia on "Morning Mist" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 6:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sylvia. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/13/2011 5:14:00 PM

    Congrats Sylvia on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope u are well and happy....

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 11:51:00 AM

    excellent words my friend thank you [duncan]

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 1:54:00 PM

    We are so fortunate to have this planet earth as our home, and yes she does show us breathtaking beauty. She also gives us poets and writers so much material to write about >> James

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 8:00:00 AM

    Marvellous imagery and the personified Earth in mist is exactly portrayed.........well done......good poetry......sincerely.....Syd

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 3:56:00 PM

    Enjoy the mist also..Glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by and recommenting on my MRI write..I couldn't take that enclosed tube so they sent me to Open MRI...I had never had trouble before with this MRI and I don't know why I didn't like it..I went to sleep once before when I had to have one before I had back surgery...Sara

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 6:31:00 PM

    VEry lovely, Sylvia!

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 4:46:00 PM

    What a beautiful description of the images in a foggy morning at daybreak, Sylvia. Very captivating poem! Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 12:35:00 PM

    Absolute brilliance Sylvia ... luv the Salome dance.. awesome line.. hope u decide to enter the contest scene as your poetry is quite good for competition... kukos for being married so long and still in luv... my romance and marriage has truly been fairy tale like .. almost like Cinderella...luv.. enjoyed ...

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 11:49:00 AM

    What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Sylvia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 10:12:00 AM

    sounds pretty... I can see candles and muted lines and darkness--lots of music!

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 8:42:00 AM

    I had a heck of a time getting "Bell of Life" centered on this website. It's both a List form and a Shape poem. Do you prefer to be called "June"? Your mention of "Salome dance" in your poem "Morning Mist" impelled me to Google it and I learned the some details about the story of John the baptist beheading I didn't know including the dance.

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 7:20:00 AM

    What a fine beauty you have personified out of the mist, enjoyed it. Sylvia