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sentenced

they sentenced me to 
pay off your credit cards and
back tax ring that bell

they sentenced me to 
be subjected to grumpy
not so special day

they sentenced me to
wish I didn't waste my time
trying to be sweet

they sentenced me to
wonder about your motives
it feels so phony

they sentenced me to 
first take back my heart and then 
protect it from you

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  1. Date: 10/5/2010 8:37:00 PM

    Hey, good writes on a person that doesn't sound too deserving of you! I liked your comment you said about love of odd numbers. My numerology is 5 and 7. So I love that too!

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 6:00:00 AM

    wonderful haiku .. smile thanks for the comment on my poem ...love Jayne

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 11:05:00 AM

    What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Kristi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 5:55:00 AM

    Very unique way to get sentenced.

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 3:07:00 AM

    Enjoyed the read but left me questioning. Nice piece well written.