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Southwestern Woman

        Hot sun...Burning Earth...Molded from Red clay,Covered with Callichie,Cooked Hard
in the Sun.   Strong with thought...yet, woman screams and not heard...Lonely, like the
mountain covered in snow...Hot Sun...Touch me and make me new.

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  1. Date: 10/1/2010 7:26:00 AM

    Truly a poem of deep thought, and a great tribute to all womanhood

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 7:36:00 PM

    Thank you so much for your welcome, and input I am most gratful.

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 6:56:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup .. enjoyed this creative write tonight... nice bio .. hope your stay on soup is fun.. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with lluv..

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 9:39:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rebekah. Wishing you the best in your writing Mikeendeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 5:53:00 AM

    Nice pen picture of the Southwestern woman. Nicely worded.Rebekah