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I like her, she likes me
I kissed her, she kissed me
I love her, she loves me

I'm busy, she’s busy
I'm yelling, she’s screaming
I'm angry, she’s crying
I'm trying, she’s trying

I'm leaving, she’s leaving
I'm lonely, she’s lonely
I lost a love, she lost a friend
I never saw her, and she never saw me again.

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  1. Date: 9/28/2010 12:34:00 PM

    Good write dude T.Y for the kind comment on Poets keep up the work :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 10:46:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jay. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 5:37:00 AM

    Nice thoughts on passionate feelings for each other, Jay

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 5:29:00 AM

    Interesting write my friend...