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Willow

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Willow

In his arms I am free to explore the oceans ~ 
openly caste my gaze 'pon stars twinkling 
 in the midnight skies; 
his hand gently caressed my face, 
as willow wept her tears 'pon the winds ~ 
From wind a genteel sigh of reprieve is released
as tender droplets of precious rain, 
and honeysuckles wantonly bloom 
'pon receiving them -- And Aye,
I am free to explore the oceans and more,
in his arms I have found both ecstasy and tranquility
For he is the hearth of my home...

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:03:00 PM

    Adell,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 10:39:00 AM

    impressed the way you lay it for him" love it ( Lin~Ra )

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 1:39:00 PM

    Very romantically expressed, Adell. comparing love to ocean is awesome. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 6:00:00 PM

    This poem is so truly lovely. It's like a soft, gentle breeze upon the skin. The words create a cherished moment as it speaks so dulcetly. It reminds me of keltic legends, ancient vows and romantic visions. Very warm in passion and cool in colorful artistry ... A masterpiece ... MoonBee

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 7:22:00 AM

    Nice use of imagery and words in this poem, Adell! So often people cannot express their feelengs! Well done!...Gert:)

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 6:07:00 PM

    Interesting perspective and use of language. Creative imagery. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 1:40:00 PM

    Such a romantic and loving write..To be so loved by another is grand...thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 12:02:00 PM

    What creative imagery and great use of metaphor with the sea, Adell. You ar very lucky to have someone in whose arms you find happiness and comfort. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 8:35:00 AM

    A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Adell. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 8:29:00 AM

    Well expressed thoughts on willow, Adell