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Trip to The Immortal

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Below is the poem entitled Trip to The Immortal which was written by poet Afolayan Oluwaseun Olanike. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Trip to The Immortal

All too strangled
Tingling like the cathedral bell
Woven together like a twine thread
 long like end will never come
All rough and dusty
The trip to the immortal

Thirst is an understatement
Fire emanating from within
Water prickling down in an array
A continuous array
Slowly and steady
The trip to the immortal

Flesh all worn out
Perfume you can not find
Heart too heavy to walk
Leading to the thought of height and above
The trip to the immortal

Hearts swings in the wave of melody
Melody a path to accomplishment
Gazing at the Olympic ark
Athens is mine, Sparta I own
The trip to the immortal
See you at the other end of the bridge

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  1. Date: 9/27/2010 8:33:00 AM
    A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Afolayan. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 10:36:00 AM
    Wonderful read thanks