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PleasureThe melody gradually filters

The melody gradually filters
Through my being 
Filling my soul with joy
I go with it savouring, anticipating
It’s genius – no other thoughts enter
Just floating with the melody
Surprised by some discords they startle me
Prepare me for the majesty of sound to come

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  1. Date: 1/8/2011 1:12:00 PM

    Hi Liz. this is a fantastic bit of writing. A cacophony of Mozartic melodies exploding within in that part of us which we call soul. Eamon

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 2:46:00 PM

    Hi Liz-Another beautiful piece.You have the ability to take a simple theme and give it a magic all your own.Lovely! luv June(Sylvia)

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 11:50:00 AM

    Interesting description of music.. Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 6:56:00 AM

    you speak as one who knows music.john

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 7:16:00 PM

    I've never written a pose poem Liz. Looks like they worked for you in this nice poem. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 2:30:00 PM

    This is so joyful, Liz, a real "pick-me-up" for the reader. Hope those sounds of discord didn't spoil your happiness on this delightful day. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 1:35:00 PM

    Melodious verse Liz, thanks for your comment on my write. Hope you will enjoy your weekend ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 1:36:00 PM

    interestingly anticipated . . . .thanks, too, for your comments. no "music" as such, just a scratchy tune to fit the words together as I drove to work. regards, daniel

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:24:00 AM

    Nice write with nice expressions, Liz

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 3:00:00 AM

    OOOOOh Liz, this one gave me chills! Music is the calming elixir of the world, yet in contrast also may be the exuberant one that forces feet to tap and move one to the dance floor. I love it! Mahalo, Connie

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 2:56:00 AM

    So well written, perfect meter and rhyme. Enjoed this melodic poem.