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Love, Life, and Death

We Shared a love no one could know
We had a bond no Blade could cut
we had a friendship no hatred could penetrate
but we never were together

I was given so many chances to Prove my love
to make you mine
But death seperated us now I have no chance
but if you listen now from high in heaven
know I care and I will never forget
what could have been*


Not my best but Just a Ode to my good friend Kara
R.I.P

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  1. Date: 10/1/2010 5:38:00 AM

    Lovely tribute to your friend congrates on having your poem featured this week glad I found it ... love Jayne

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 8:54:00 AM

    JACOB, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 8:45:00 AM

    Hello! Jacob, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 6:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jacob. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 5:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Jacob in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 6:51:00 PM

    I'm sure she hears you. congrats on your win, Jacob.

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 2:51:00 PM

    My congratulations on your 5th Place win in the contest, with this heartfelt poem, Jake..A nice tribute to your dear friend..Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 11:53:00 AM

    Surely she must have known how much you loved her, Jacob. You poem reminds me of the best friend I had for 18 years -- a platonic relationship, but never has my love been stronger. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 11:15:00 AM

    Thanks Jacob for honoring my contest with "Love, Life and Death" An awesome poem of the heart sentiments. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 10:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Jacob

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 10:02:00 AM

    Congrats Jacob on your big win in John's contest with these great words so poignant.. enjoy your sweet success this happy Sunday with luv..

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 5:02:00 PM

    A lovely piece Jacob.. its form is Free Verse.. u should enter this piece in the Love Notes contest on the contest page... good luck with luv..

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 2:19:00 PM

    Very nice tribute you have paid to your good friend, Jacob