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--Ecstasy--

I Remember the Night my Existence 
Caused them so much Jealous Rage
They Plotted to Kill me. .
Chasing after me, I Sought out to get Away. .
Distant from that House,
I Ran Fast, Faster than they ever could,
To the Place Far-off,
Where you Reside. .I would Cross many Roads,
Just to get to you.
To Feel your Warmth. .
The Length of your Hair, it’s so Beautiful.
The Closer I Grew, the more they had begun to Grow Tired. .
Gone Astray, at Last to Leave me be.
The Chaos I Escaped was Rid from the 
Thoughts of my Mind as I Sauntered up 
Calmly to your Door. .
You must have Heard the Call of my Heart,
For you were there Only Moments after my Knock.
I Gazed into those Gentle Eyes as they 
Read the Expression I Failed to Hide. .
You Knew well of what Stayed in Amiss,
And so you took me inside your Arms. .
It was then that Familiar Sensation 
You gave me had began set to Fire. .
Still, I Held the Tears.
Within your Room, where we would Speak 
Of the Days in our Lives.
I Slipped into a Warm Shirt of yours. .
As you Held me Close, I would Feel your Heart onto Mine.
The Words you Whisper through my Ear
Make me Forget of the Coldness I Live Each Day.
I Reminisce the Way you Told me how you would
Take Us both Away from here,
To a Peaceful Setting. .Off into the Distance,
Within the Near Future. .
Where our Sweet, & Deep Love,
Would not be Invaded a Day in Time.
I Knew what you Spoke was True. .
For it was Written in the Destiny of Yours, & Mine,
If Only we could have. .Lived. .to that Day. .
But Until now. .I Breath in your Soft Aroma,
As you Embrace me with a Love so Precious. .
Our Lips Fall in Touch,
Your Angels. .they Take me Higher.
My Body Shivers, as your Fingers Glide Soothingly
Over my Velvet Skin. .
And Oh my Soul,
It Shakes of Ecstasy, as we are taken Away. .
To a Place where Our Spirits Entwine. .
Every Time, the Moment your Touch. .
Is Felt Within me. .


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~Written September 12, 2010
~Apart of ". .Because You Were All I Had. ."
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*For Contest STORY TIME, Sponsered by Carol Brown

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  1. Date: 5/28/2011 7:54:00 PM

    * “Smile * I Just Wished to Return Unto This Amazingly Beautiful Painting * Dear Precious & Beautiful Lynette. * To Thank Your Lovely Light For Stopping By * Joy. * Afore Moving On Unto Another Of Beauties Canvas' of Spectacular Poetic Art. * Hugs & Kissses * Kisssses & Hugs * Always & Forever. * Sarah” *

  1. Date: 4/30/2011 2:19:00 AM

    * Ps. * 'everytime the moment Your touch' * 'is felt within me' * “Yesss” * i wished to let * “Your Beautiful Light" * know that i am going to fave the two of * “You & Your Masterpiece of Love” *

  1. Date: 4/30/2011 2:12:00 AM

    * Spellbinding * i saw Your lovely name in ones poetic coms box and came to visit and * Owww * what absolute beauty did i find * such a detailed sweet and sour tale * but it is amazingly * beautiful love * spoken amid such passion which * melted into my own heart this * “Beauty” * this stirring inside my spirit * “The Sweet Essence of You” * 'and oh my Soul, it shakes of ecstasy' * dreams are made of such * “Love” * completely beautiful * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

  1. Date: 10/31/2010 10:46:00 AM

    A wonderful heartfelt write, an enjoyment to read. I felt as though I felt what you felt, the love. Caryl

  1. Date: 10/12/2010 7:26:00 AM

    Hi Lynette :) how are you?? Hope everything's doing good with you! Sorry I missed this amazing write from before-- but as always, you grip me with your poems-- yet another one that is filled with emotion :) Wonderful poem as always -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 10:07:00 AM

    Thnx for the comments left on my piece, Lynette. ...Jimmy

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 5:29:00 AM

    Love is an escape from every fault, and friendship a sheltering tree ... and intriguing tale ... hemmed with passion, stitched with delight.

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 6:53:00 PM

    amazing Lynette, you truely have a gift for writting:), good luckers on the contest, =(^.^)=Royal

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 6:09:00 PM

    Amazing write! Thanks for the comments always. ... Audrey

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 5:20:00 PM

    Carol loves stories, this sound like one that will perk up the ears, Smile. Hope you are doing well Lynette. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 4:49:00 PM

    Thank you so much for your comments today, Lynette. It is nice to see you visiting the Soup again and I hope you will start posting more poetry soon. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:27:00 PM

    Powerful tale of love! Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 6:33:00 AM

    well written poem you have here!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 6:32:00 AM

    your comment gave me a great laugh this morning!! Thanks I needed it!! I am glad to see some one finds my silliness funny....I like to have died when I saw that poem, so I had to share it.... IGTP LOL (I've got to pee)

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 11:55:00 AM

    Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/18/2010 3:17:00 AM

    Your words are full of passion and love. This is an excellent entry for Carol's contest. Good luck!:) Emilia

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 7:55:00 PM

    Gosh, Lynette how many poems of mind are you reading? I am happy to see you reading them but it makes me feel guilty that I cannot read anything new of yours!! This one is new for me. It is quite passionate, Lynette. I hope it will do well in Carol's contest for you and I'm happy to see you trying a contest. The pink mini dress from home-ec. Yes, I wore it a few times. It had little shorts under it. Kinda cute. I wonder what happened to it??

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 7:37:00 PM

    A truly amazing piece Lynette.. it seems so real to the reader and your expressions.. our lips fall in touch... your Angels, they take me Higher..such a beautiful gift u have full of emotional expression.. good luck in the contest my sweet friend..and again..thankxxx for my poem ... good luck in Irma's contest as well..luv..

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 10:29:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your poetry today Lynette. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 3:57:00 AM

    Interesting Narrative..Reads of young love and the need to escape to become that independent person that youth so desires..Glad that I chose this one today...I was gladden that you stopped by and read my work yesterday..Sara

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 12:51:00 AM

    Smile ~ Again, it is very nice to see "Your Beauty" here once more &, I hope that "Your Magnificence" shall continue to write for, "You Are An Extremely 'Rare & Gifted Treasure' Indeed!!!" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day 'Dear, Precious Lynette,' Amid The Gentle & Caressing Winds of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye Dear!:) ~

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 12:37:00 AM

    Smile ~ You know I too as LeeAnn below read "This Beautiful Jewel" twice through &, the love is sooo very profound; a love that most every life can only dream to find if but only once, before they die; that is how very "Astonishingly Beautiful, Does Seem This 'Love;' Amazing!!!" ~ Again, "You Have One of 'The Most Beautiful Souls' That My Soul Has 'Ever' Beheld; 'Spellbinding'" ~ I believe that I shall fave this "Diamond of A Loves Beautiful Heart 'Dear, Lovely Lynette Chachere'" & ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 12:16:00 AM

    Smile ~ "This Is Such A Beautifully Stirring & Amazing Write, 'Dear Lovely, Precious & Talented Lynette Chachere!!!'" ~ Its good to see "Your Splendors" here again dear lady & I hope very deeply that life has been treating "Your Treasures" absolutely wonderfully & that, All which "Your Beautiful & Priceless Heart & Soul" could Ever hope for & or desire, has been given unto "Your Brightness As Though 'Light Upon Light'" ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 9/15/2010 3:53:00 PM

    This poor troubled soul was fortunate to have someone who offered such great love and support. What a beautiful poem, dear friend. We have missed you, Lynette. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/15/2010 2:36:00 PM

    Nice to see you online:), wow Lynette this write I read two times and the second time struck me, very sad and in a way beauty to it with your words, the love they had destroyed by envy in such, emotions running for this write, very much pleased to read this one, you are very talented young lady...P.D.