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brief fragile eternity

brief fragile eternity
you are amongst the heaped postures of my thoughts
and if idle i idly return

as in my bed or car(any placid grain
revolve to fore and captivate largely
my anxious floating fingers

             of)my mind

bursting on your slippery

            

                                                                                   forever

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  1. Date: 9/11/2010 8:03:00 PM

    nice write, enjoyed this one tonight..P.D.

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 5:03:00 PM

    Another unique write. I particularly enjoyed the second line, very poetically posed.