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Halloween Haiku

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Halloween Haiku

Triple Haiku
5,7,5 -- 5,7,5 -- 5,7,5

Evil brews, no rules,
looming witches ride their brooms,
demon eyed ghouls drool.

Potions have been brewed,
voodoo dolls alter my mood.
Serial killers.

Vampires, Ware-wolves,
Kruger and Micheal Meyers,
stalking to retire..

***Note*** This is an edit of my original Random Thoughts *49* Haiku--Tanka--Haiku... 

 
Jared Pickett
Asavvy1
9/8/2010

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  1. Date: 11/5/2010 5:20:00 PM

    as always TOO much Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/15/2010 3:42:00 AM

    this made me crack up and also should be told on halloween night loved the imagery here congrats on placement my friend also thanks a bunch for your kindest comments on my stuff I will be back to hit ya up more me behind on giving returns views again thanks for the great read keep on trucking my friend

  1. Date: 9/14/2010 10:31:00 AM

    Good luck in the contest with this scary write...Sara

  1. Date: 9/14/2010 8:25:00 AM

    Soup Mail Bro!!

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 1:30:00 PM

    wow! you should check out some of my poems. even though they may not be as good as yours. but at least read them? and comment? have a good day... -Angel4eva23

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 5:41:00 AM

    Congratulations Jared. Nice job and great win!

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 10:06:00 AM

    congrats on your spooky win

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 12:26:00 AM

    talk about spooky.what a fabulous entry....congratulations on your win, in poetry, Dory

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 12:05:00 AM

    Congratulations Jared on your second place" way to go", Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 11:45:00 PM

    excellent winer Jared. Harry

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 10:46:00 PM

    WAy to go, Jared, I hope to try out the way using a tanka in the middle too. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 8:28:00 PM

    Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 8:01:00 PM

    Congrats, brah.

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 7:12:00 PM

    Jared, congratulations on your high placement in Linda's contest, and for inspiring the new format in her new contest!~Chris

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 6:45:00 PM

    Congratulations on the second place win, Jared

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 6:09:00 PM

    Congrats Jared on your win :) this sure is a creepy feel to it nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 5:11:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Jared. Love Carol

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 2:05:00 PM

    I knew this would do well, Jared. Great haiku series! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 1:35:00 PM

    Congrats Jared on your success in my Halloween Haiku contest.. an awesome entry full of eerie spooky lines ... creativity personified .. thankxxx for supporting my contest ..luv..

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 10:29:00 AM

    You did an excellent work here loving here well done---luv kelechi

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 7:44:00 PM

    I just wrote about this poem I read yesterday when the sweetheart posted her composition. Jared

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 1:23:00 PM

    thankxxx Mr. J.. I LUV it this way too.. u can put it back the original way after the contest ...u are so sweet to work with me this way..I won't forget how cooperative u can be ... good luck Lone Wolf.....now howl loud so Mama can hear u..luv..

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 12:50:00 PM

    Please keep these predators away from the little ones. Kruger has always been especially frightening with those long nails. I think you did a good job rewriting your original into a triple haiku. Have a great day, Jared. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 10:55:00 AM

    Neat poem! Hate to think of kids roaming around with witches and serial killers on the loose. Werewolves and vampires along with Freddie and Meyers - wow, that's a lot to take in. I'll stay home on Halloween!

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 10:48:00 AM

    I am almost certain this poem will not place because it lacks power, it lacks the savvy feel that you are all used to.... This is more for "Sweethearts" enjoyment, and my willingness to stay within her guidelines.... The Tanka in the center stanza sets the poem off... Please read the poem noted at the end.......:JP]