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Patradoot or The Messenger 38 /Many

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Patradoot or The Messenger 38 /Many

Patradoot or The Messenger 38 /Many

English version by Ravindra K Kapoor 
Originally written in Hindi by my 
Late father Dr. Amar Nath Kapoor


The charm and beauty of her lovely eyes, dear,
I could not find even in the loveliness of a deer,
Such are the fascinating charms of her eyes, 
Even the Sun would not come out feeling shy. 

If any tears would appear in her eyes by mistake,
It would get burnt by the shine of her eyelids, dear letter,
Even the bunch of deer moving here and there
Would feel shy to behold the beauty of such eyes.

Such lovely pairs of my beloved’s eyes would be luster less
Because of her long waiting for me and her silent sobbing,
The moment she would see and hear you, dear letter,
Tears would start coming out from her eyes like rivers.

Her face use to shine like the full Moon, dear letter,
After the tender touch of my love rains,
In compassion of seeing such beauty of her, dear,
The Moon too would feel shy to appear before her.

During the chewing of beetle leafs dear letter, 
Her lips used to get red,  darker than the lotus petals,
Seeing even Sun with its alluring redness would feel,
Shy to come out before my beloved,  dear letter. 

Ravindra

Kanpur India      09th Sept 2010                     continues in 39

Based on the true freedom struggle story of Dr. Amar Nath Kapoor

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Send me an email on kapoor_skk@yahoo.com

Patradoot in Hindi was originally written by my late father 
Dr. Amar Nath Kapoor around 1932, who was a freedom fighter.

He wrote Patradoot in Hindi, when he was kept in Faizabad Jail for quite
a long time. The Epic was written as a gift for my mother and it was
sent to her secretly from Faizabad Jail. He was imprisoned
by the British, as he was fighting for India's freedom 
under the leadership of Mahatma Gandhi. He was imprisoned 
many times during 1920 to 1947. After India’s
independence as a true follower of Gandhi Dr. Amar Nath 
Kapoor left active politics and devoted rest of his life in 
writing easy mass literature and wrote many Dramas, 
Poetry books, epics. All his other literary 
works were mainly written from 1955 to 1990. 
He left this mortal world in 1994.

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  1. Date: 9/14/2010 1:56:00 PM
    Enjoyed another wonderful write. Caryl

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 11:27:00 AM
    Can I get some of this in hindi?

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 5:37:00 PM
    RAVINDRA, BEAUTIFUL. ENJOYED~LUV*SKAT

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 5:25:00 AM
    Wonderful Ravindra, the eyes are a whole different world of captivating words. The eyes can be used to charm, or release many unspoken feelings. Also they hold mystery, a lovely letter,, and who could forget about the perfect matching lips,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 2:48:00 PM
    Charming words so very beautifully written... a masterpiece of luv and devotion... enjoyed this creative piece tonight my friend... thankxxx for sharing with luv..

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 10:47:00 AM
    Another chapter of such lovely verses....they flow like a colorful rainbow of waterfalls....each part of this story, is so beautifully written. You have the gift of prose, telling this wonderful journey of your heritage. ~ Love, Carrie