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The perspective of a Halloween candle....

Bright, orange, white, flicker.....
Two black eyes, one dark mouth viewed,
I'm the flame inside

They trim the flesh out
Stubby children's hands; entrails
I'm the flame inside

My face-like windows
My removable roof-top
I'm the flame inside

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  1. Date: 9/7/2010 7:28:00 PM

    I invite you to enter my contest "The Universe" see contest page.Rick

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 1:08:00 PM

    Unique and orginal ! I loved this one!! :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 9:04:00 PM

    Really unique and strong interpretation of the Hallowe'en Haiku contest....if not for the contest, I most enjoyed reading this a lot!~Chris

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 7:55:00 PM

    love it, good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 7:54:00 PM

    Thats quite cool~enjoyed~Rick