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Frozen

The streets are dark
There’s no one out there for me
You have left me here
And now I remain here waiting
Waiting for nothing

I have felt my heart crushed
It was nothing imaginable
You have left my chest empty
A hallow space without any light
And now I was left here just standing still

No movement, no slight glance of life
Just frozen
You have kept me here alive
But now I’m just frozen

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  1. Date: 9/13/2010 2:00:00 PM

    Such deep emotion in this one..It was like experiencing it myself..Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more post like this one and may you enjoy the reading of many of the other gifted poets that post on here...Sara